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Reviews for As man hath caused a blemish...

By : EleniD
  • From gambitgurlisis on June 13, 2007
    HOT. Super hot.

    Bravo!

    More? :3
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  • From CaptDavyJonesLover on June 12, 2007
    well that ass got what he deserved. haha shes wearing the captains shirt. interesting updates. so his tastes swing the other way huh? okkayy i get it. keep it up mate
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  • From PrimitiveScrewhead on June 12, 2007
    Asskicking! good!
    thank goodness for Wiggs.
    hehehe i love it when davy's growly...
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  • From PrimitiveScrewhead on June 11, 2007
    this is the second fic in the past two days I've had to walk away from for a few minutes to compose myself... I was laughing so damned hard at the imagery of her fixing his coat and adjusting it and all that... and that totally baffled look on his face as she did so... hoo!

    OH my...
    I just ran up to stir my macaroni squeeling 'oh my god she slugged him!'
    hahaha

    At least she's got some backup... hehee, wiggsy :P

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  • From CaptDavyJonesLover on June 11, 2007
    owies, i feel sorry for her...almost, she DID assult the captain. shes a firey one and i hope things between them get heated soon
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  • From gambitgurlisis on June 10, 2007
    This is such a fantastic story! It's so refreshing to see a girl on the Dutchman who isn't treated differently as most fics tend to. Also: the frequent updates are a very welcome surprise! :3
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  • From CaptDavyJonesLover on June 09, 2007
    i bet that made him think. ooh will those hips get pressed together again? pleasepleaseplease...keep it up
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  • From PrimitiveScrewhead on June 09, 2007
    simple is good. poetics sometimes get in the way of it.

    that said, the poetics in THIS chapter ruled. :D and I love how Davy totally gets into her personal space. Me being a dumbass I would have likely gone into some rant about men blaming women for thier own follies and weaknesses but he'd likely snap my neck right after... lol

    keep goin' this is such a fun read
    oh, and that asshole in the kitchen? As long as he doesn't go all Tyler Durden-style peeing in the stew... lol.

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  • From PrimitiveScrewhead on June 08, 2007
    Pirate isn't something you do...it's something you are

    great line...

    and the seasick on the grass?!? HAHAHAH. :D

    "He walked as if telling the whole world to piss off"
    YES! man. perfect description. (i'm simple that way... honestly, it does look like that!)

    one shoe? HORRORS!
    :D
    i'm lovin' this.

    ps: squee! cool that you read it!
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  • From CaptDavyJonesLover on June 08, 2007
    keep it up, please. i like her firey tone. will she change like the crew i wonder.
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  • From darkandcoldbeauty on June 08, 2007
    Interesting...keep going!!
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  • From gambitgurlisis on June 07, 2007
    Very nice, do continue!
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  • From Sundragon on June 07, 2007
    I really like this! Looking forward to the next installment! :D
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  • From CaptDavyJonesLover on June 06, 2007
    i likes, keep it up!!
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  • From PrimitiveScrewhead on June 06, 2007
    its fun as hell so far. I don't read too many self-insertions normally but you made it fun. Modern girl instead of pirate speak is so much easier, ain't it?
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