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Reviews for The Tolling of the Bell

By : Pilgrim
  • From Kimmie on August 12, 2007
    omg. i can actually not speak. I missed three chapters!! I cant believe i totally forgot to come on! Im so excited for whats to come though. Cant wait for Jack and Oria to reunite again (they'd better *shakes fist* kidding i wont hurt you). And whats happening with Beckett????!!!!!! omg squee this story is great cant wait for the update!!!

    Kimmie

    xx
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  • From Kimmie on July 15, 2007
    oh i came on here tocheck the latest chapter and there were 3!! I knew i had missed a week but then when there were three i freaked! its all good now though. eagerly waiting for August 3rd.

    I cant wait to see what happens next! i want Oria back! lol gotta love her she is awesome....and so are you. you are the one who created her so you are brilliant!

    Kimmie
    xx
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  • From Kimmie on July 07, 2007
    Ok two things. You dont have to call me Lady Linwe. My Real name is Kimberley but people call me Kimmie. Also thanks for making me cry! That chapter was so sad! It was also too short! I need to know what happens!!!! I cant wait till next week!!! Ill die! I have a theory though so i will try and make myself believe its true then i wont be too upset. Make my theory right!
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  • From ANON - Michelle on July 03, 2007
    Two lovely chapters as usual. You had me at the edge of my seat as I was reading the battle between Norrington and Oria. It was a totally new experience for her not having the ability to heal and nerve racking for me because I'm use to her kicking butt with ease and not having to worry she was going to die. Oh no!!! Oria can die!!!! Where the $&^%& is Jack???? He has to save her!!! I'm so glad an update will be on friday because I cannot wait to see what will happen next.
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  • From Kimmie on July 02, 2007
    OMG I am absolutely loving this! Im so glad you continued on with Jack and Oria. I love her character. I dont remember if i reviewed the last stories but if i didnt then i feel ashamed that i havent. I know its probably unlikely but please dont kill Oria! I couldnt bear it if she died.

    Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Michelle on June 16, 2007
    Chapter two....I liked that things were getting back to normal with pirating on the open sea. It was very funny how Jack and Gibbs reacted to the loot after the raid. I know it can't be helped, it's the pirate in them. lol It was also cute when Jack kept a watchful eye on Oria, as if she can't take care of herself, yeah right! But very sweet. He's got it bad for her!!! But the best part. I think anyway, was the last sentence when Jack finally came around to Oria's earlier comment,"What cabin boy?" I loved it. hee hee You go Oria!! Someone needs to keep him in line. :P Twists and turns coming up in future chapters.....bring it on, I'm ready. :)
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  • From ANON - Michelle on June 09, 2007
    WOW!!! First of all yay for another story with Oria and Jack and *Fans face to cool down* what a beginning!!! I'm so happy to see Jack and Oria together and so happy. Oria deserves to be happy and what better way than to be with Jack!!! Nice job and looking forward to the next chaper. :)
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