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By : minkajane
  • From StormSeer on April 26, 2009
    Interesting take on (the ending?). I want more! ;) How does it end?
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  • From Vyper on October 08, 2008
    Ok, Jereth may have given her pleasure, but the jerk only gives her one lousy hour. Why not just keep her in his chambers, give up the kid and do the mating dance for the rest of their lives? Good story.
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  • From Felicia on December 23, 2007
    Well, i like the overall story. But it really didnt do anything for me becouse i usually just read M/M or F/F but it was good none the less. there was one thing that i didnt like though and that is, Sara seamed Out of Character. but thats to be expected in stories like this.



    I love you Baby Gurl!!! ^.^
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  • From BabyMax on September 30, 2007
    Very good for a first time! I would be interested to see more of this story. I think this is the first time that I've seen one that didn't wait until Sarah was at least 18 years old before continuing the story. I look forward to seeing if you write more!
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  • From ArachneNonafel on July 18, 2007
    Are you going to finiah this? I like it!
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  • From hollilia on May 31, 2007
    Oooo Nice! Very good for a first timer! I mean in Labyrinth fiction. I keep seeing Jareth tempting her along theway, then in the end she still tells him no... lol, but then again I am somewhat twisted. Very nice writing, nice discriptions and nice getting Jareth into character. You Rock my friend

    Hollilia
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  • From DracoCristatus on May 28, 2007
    This one is excellent only real cristism i can offer is i want more make the sequel please.
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  • From LadyNightshade on May 16, 2007
    Not a bad story, I'd say. I admit, I love Jareth to death.

    But yes, overall, this was well-written and pretty in character, though I would say a bit rushed. But it's a oneshot, so I can't really complain. Anyway, keep writing!
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  • From DesiringPirates on May 04, 2007
    Is there going to be more? This was very good!
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  • From SnapesSweetheart on April 30, 2007
    I like it alot and I would love to read more. What happens next?! You can't just leave it a one shot. Please!!
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