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Reviews for River Falls

By : jemstone5
  • From Aimzy on June 07, 2007
    Great chapter! I'm all worried about M'Pa now, lol. So, please...PLEASE...update soon. I'm hoping he gets some alone time with El soon... *nudge nudge wink wink*
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  • From PrimitiveScrewhead on June 06, 2007
    chapter three...
    *faint*

    wow.

    :D

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  • From CaptDavyJonesLover on June 06, 2007
    awww i love it, keep it up..poor M'pa
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  • From prairiefire on May 15, 2007
    Throws cute, big, watery "Puss-In-Boots" eyes over to Jem.

    Please update. We miss you.
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  • From Aimzy on May 12, 2007
    Hi jemstone! I signed up for an account just to tell you how much I'm enjoying this story. Been following it since the beginning. I love all the characters, but especially M'Pa- he and El have great chemistry. *grin*

    Please, please update soon! I've been in suspense for too long now, and I can't take it anymore, lol.

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  • From Kalar on April 25, 2007
    I love it...love it...love it!!!! Please don't let El die. The babies need her and so do Ver'On and M'Pa. I am anxious for the next chapter. ,,,=^..^=,,,
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  • From JulieL on April 24, 2007
    Wow. El's just gotta survive. I think I might be able to take a guess why Ver'On was hissed at, but I'm gonna zip my lip and wait and find out. And like Muse, I think I know what Kal has in mind.
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  • From MuseofScrolls on April 24, 2007
    Finally had the babies, but not out of the fire just yet. Poor El. I know what Kal has in mind to help save her. And I'm a little surprised at the third baby hissing at Ver'On. Very curious. Can't wait for the next update, jemstone.
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  • From prairiefire on April 24, 2007
    Babies!!!!

    Such a tragic blessed event. I hope El is going to OK. She deserves to be OK so much.

    OYE!! Three boys. She's is going to NEED two mates to help take care of them, plus about a hundred more eyes and 500 more arms.

    What's going to become of the cop, Tyler. Honestly, I don't think he can or should go with him. Maybe stay behind and take over Bastian's job. Get someone into the sheriff's office that isn't a corrupt arsehole.

    As always, love and please update soon. Such wonderful writing.
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  • From CaptDavyJonesLover on April 23, 2007
    awww, i love it....hope she wont die...better not...keep it up
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  • From DeathGodDist on April 22, 2007
    Jeez, your writing just keeps getting more dramatic and better with each chapter. You can feel the tension going through the air in this one, and again, another cliffhanger-type ending. Interesting to note that one of the babies hissed at Ver'On as if he wasn't the father. Oh, I'm so eager to see where you will take this.

    On a side note, I'm curious as to what happened to those two girls who came along with Chonie, how are they doing?

    Wonderful story as always, never stop writing. :)
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  • From littlemissy1503 on April 22, 2007
    wow that was great. can't wait for more you've got me on the edge of my seat now.
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  • From Retribution on April 18, 2007
    Dam jem, please hurry with the next chapter. The cliff hangers make me a nervous wreck. and please make El and the babies live, it would kill me to see something happen to them.

    Ar'Shiya
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  • From littlemissy1503 on April 16, 2007
    I'm sooo glad to see you back. I love this chapter...really scared for El and the babies. update soon.
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  • From CaptDavyJonesLover on April 16, 2007
    yay youre back!!! great first chapter, keep em coming.
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