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Reviews for Desire

By : EvilE
  • From EmmaElizaRose on April 22, 2018

    Hi, so I actually made an acount for the sole purpose of reviewing this story.

    And OH my GOd.

    I don't know what to say, actually. The very end, "if he could remember what it was like to want her, then he could remember what it was like to be alive" just killed me. You perfectly captured the apathy Jack was left with and how empty and sad it made him.

    Is it just me, or does his constant insistance that he doesn't love her and only wants her sexually point to slight denial of deeper feeling?

    Anyway, AMAZING JOB. Made me cry a lil bit, actually.


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  • From LizzieSwan on November 03, 2007
    Great!
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  • From ANON - julia on August 13, 2007
    smutty, but at the same time very funny. brilliant work!
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  • From akathetoad on June 29, 2007
    Delightfully smutty. Oh how I love Jack.
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  • From BrethlessM on June 21, 2007
    This is absolute, divine and sinful perfection. I want more, but it would be too much, it's that perfect. Writer to writer, this is just IT.

    Thank you for the filthy moment of perfect beauty.

    Kimberlee
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  • From ANON - Eillen on June 13, 2007
    girl! this is hot hot hoooot!
    you write so well!
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  • From ANON - Jillybean on May 28, 2007
    Brilliant - very fun!
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  • From ANON - Parlay on April 15, 2007
    Wow, that was amazingly hot - like all the wonderful drabbles you could ever possibly imagine about Jack and Lizzy rolled into one, glorious lovefest.

    You write amazingly - so many writers overdo or underdo sex scenes but yours was just so matter-of-fact, so very, very Jack.

    The ending grounds it in the Canon nicely, and adds a touch of bittersweetness to the entire story.

    Brilliantly smutty :)
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  • From tinamonic on April 07, 2007
    I loved it! I hope he gets the chance to carry out his fantasies!
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  • From Femmevixen13 on April 06, 2007
    Woo, that was steamy! I agree, you should write a sequel where Lizzie caves into Jack's desires. ;D
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  • From suchafangirl on April 05, 2007
    That was freaking HOT! And well written. I really hope you write more about what happens after he gets rescued from the locker(we all know he will be). I loved it!
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