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By : Jawala39
  • From freelke on July 10, 2007
    YAY. Im so happy you wrote another chapter! "Jack's defensewas typical, he ran away"! HAHA that cracked me up! I loved this chapter, hope you already have the next chapter in your head. Thank you for updating so quick, I can barely wait until the next one. This story has such a unique quality I can't seem to get enough of. I'm glad you haven't tired of me nagging you for chapters :) I can't find a story as good as this one anywhere else. Please update again soon when you get a chance! It would make my day!
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  • From amandamichelle8 on July 10, 2007
    Oh, oh god! This last chapter was... wow... *falls over and dies*
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  • From freelke on July 05, 2007
    I'm sure you're probably tired of me by now, but I just wanted to say again how much I liked the last chapter you posted. I hope you find the time somewhere to write another chapter. I look forward to it!
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  • From akathetoad on July 03, 2007
    I'm glad you updated so quickly! More more!
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  • From Ziva on July 02, 2007
    That chapter was hilarious! Poor Jack. ;) I have no doubt who will win the bet. :D
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  • From freelke on July 02, 2007
    YAY! it made my day, no my week. I really hope you have the idea for the next chapter already. I don't know if I can make it :) I almost died from the wait! Just kidding. I love this story and I hope you post more very soon. This is one of my favorite j/e stpries of all time, from all sites I've ever vistied. Thay could all learn something from this story! Please be kind and keep your muse happy ( here, muse have a cookie).
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  • From freelke on July 01, 2007
    I do hope you find the inspiration to write another chapter soon, i've re-read the story so many times I can almost quote it :) I hope you post again soon, but it's worth the wait.
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  • From akathetoad on July 01, 2007
    Aww that was precious and pleased me to no end. Some of the dialogue, especially in the earlier chapters sent me into fits of giggles. Hell, Jack alone at the beginning hiding with the rum was hilarious. And I love that he had to explain to her where babies come from. Heh. All pirates should be required to give sex ed classes to their beautiful but incredibly naive and on occasion rather vapid lady loves. Heh. Very enjoyable.
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  • From freelke on June 26, 2007
    I got so excited again, I thoguth there was a new chapter. Which chapters have you been updating/changing?
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  • From freelke on June 22, 2007
    I got so excited when I saw an update. Alas it wasn't a new chapter..... But I re-read the last chapter again anyway. This is one of my favorites
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  • From tinamonic on June 17, 2007
    Yay! You updated! I loved this chapter as usual, especially the part where Jack rescued the bird and finally told ELizabeth that he's in love with her! I thought it was very funny how he fell out of the tree in front of Elizabeth! Great job! Can't wait for more!
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  • From freelke on June 16, 2007
    I just read it again, and I like it even more. You should cross post this to sparrabeth.com so more people can appreciate it. Hope you find a few minutes to write more :)
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  • From Vee017 on June 14, 2007
    Thank you for another amazing chapter! I love this story. It's very well written and definitely keeps my attention.

    I love the splash of uncertainty the last two chapters had. their argument and Elizabeth wondering whether or not Jack still wanted her. Loved how you solved it. Only Jack could climb a tree naked to help a baby bird ^.^

    Loved the ending. Jac would love Lizzie pregnant:)

    I eagerly await your next chapter when you have the time.
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  • From freelke on June 14, 2007
    DID i mention I love this story? More please,
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  • From DesiringPirates on June 14, 2007
    JAWALA!!!

    *thud*
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