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By : Jawala39
  • From evilkath on July 27, 2007
    I registered on this site just to review this chapter, because you truly deserve it. I love your full of humor style and your Jack is really awesome. Keep up the great work!
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  • From UndeadMonkey on July 27, 2007
    Awwh I loved this chapter, really felt Lizzie's pain when she thought Jack wouldn't marry her but then she did overreact. However I dont just think Jack would let her leave like he said, oh well, maybe he would...I dunno! I'm not sure if I want Lizzie to get pregnant or not, sure a little kid would be cute but...I dunno, might put a strain on their relationship. Im suprised she hasn't got pregnant already, maybe she can't get pregnant...? Hmm now there's a thought.
    Great story, update soon!
    x x x x
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  • From freelke on July 27, 2007
    So wonderful! I hope you write again soon. I love this story and it just keeps getting better and better. I loved this chapter but I hope she has a baby soon. SO cute!
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  • From angelnomiko on July 27, 2007
    ~lol~ that was awsome .. i love what she asked for ...please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From freelke on July 26, 2007
    AHHH I can't wait! I hope you find some time to write another chapter or two soon. I have finals next week and your story would be a much appreciated break from reality. Hope all is well ~freelke
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  • From akathetoad on July 24, 2007
    Aww cuteness. He certainly does surpass all gender lines. Mmm...Jack. I eagerly anticipate more. HURRAH!
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  • From nmos on July 22, 2007
    well written and cute as always.
    :)
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  • From angelnomiko on July 21, 2007
    wow that was awsome,and hot i love it ... please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now ..

    angel
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  • From missdanielle01 on July 18, 2007
    hey, i just started reading this story a week ago, and i just finished, and i love this story,pleeeaaassssee write more :), cant wait
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  • From SassySparrow on July 18, 2007
    Now that was one hell of a chapter! But in a positive way!!!!!!! WOW! Very, VERY well done, hon'.
    I wonder if she'll let him try again in the future - but somehow I'm sure she will, cause when Jack was your muse for this chapter, he'll come back a second time for a second chapter ;o)
    PERFECT! MORE!!!!! And thanks so much for all the wonderful time you're giving us readers with your story.
    Hoist the colours high!
    ~Sassy~
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  • From UndeadMonkey on July 18, 2007
    Oh I loved the last chapter. It was hot and saucy yet....sweet. Is that even possible? :P Oh well, Jack was so considerate when she refused him, he really does love her. I wonder what suprise she has in mind for winning the bet? hmmm....I like the chapter where you said about Jack trying to refrain from sex because he might not have Lizzie forever. Bless him. He such a lover =D
    Cant wait for the next chapter!
    x x x x
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  • From freelke on July 17, 2007
    YAY! I am so glad you wrote another chapter. It wasn't on my list of top 5 chapters, but I loved it anyway. Your writing is always wonderful. You never fail to impress :) I hope lizzy gets pregnant soon. My biological clock ticks so loud it keeps me awake at night :) I'm so glad you posted again. Please let there be another chapter VERY SOON. I don't know if I can wait another week!!
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  • From akathetoad on July 14, 2007
    Hee hee. So cute. I love how wicked and sweet they are to one another. More please sir!
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  • From GueritaSalome on July 14, 2007
    I'm enjoying this story lots. I hope you update again soon! :)
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  • From tinamonic on July 11, 2007
    Hey! I know that I don't review every chapter but I wanted to say that this was freakin' awesome! I love your fic and I also read it on sparrabeth.com! You are a very talented writer and I cannot wait to read your next chapter! Keep up the fantastic work!
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