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By : Jawala39
  • From freelke on October 14, 2007
    I am so glad you finally updated. It seemed like forever. Please write more very soon. I love this story so much! I check ALL the time :)
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  • From briarlily on October 14, 2007
    I signed up for an account on here just so I could review this fic. It's my favorite Pirates fic of all time and I've read it through at least three times. It's got great sex, great content and an awesome plot. I love it, love it, love it!!! Please update soon.
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  • From jackspeapod on October 13, 2007
    poor Jack *snif*
    luv your story
    plz update soon
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  • From UndeadMonkey on October 12, 2007
    Oh dear, the idea that Jack Sparrow cannot conceive never registered with me. Hmmm so...which one is it with the problem? If any, ofcourse. Jack will never forgive himself if something happens to Lizzie while she's out and he's brooding. Hope she's okay!
    Update soon!
    x x x x
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  • From Ventoux on October 12, 2007
    awwww, poor Jack, poor Elizabeth. Must be a kick in the teeth for poor Jack. *hugs Jack*.
    You know, it's a nice change to see that Elizabeth won't get pregnant after one night, as we see in other fics (not that I mind those LOL) but it's great to see a maybe somewhat more realistic approach.
    I really love this story, just Jack and Liz and their everyday life on the Pearl(and I thank, thank, thank you for the lack of Elfy, *bows*)
    So well written and the humor and smut are tip-top.
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  • From akathetoad on October 04, 2007
    Aww sweet and delightful and worth the wait. So much grrrr and smutness. Hurrah! Will there be more? Tell me there will be more!
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  • From wisenedwonders on September 20, 2007
    Very good! I love this story! I love all of it! Please continue as soon as you can.

    Elizabeth and Jack make such a beautiful couple. *Sighs*

    Wisend Wonders
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  • From Emeraldfires on September 13, 2007
    Best smut I've read in ages!!! Beautiful story too. Jack was dead on!!!
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  • From tinamonic on September 11, 2007
    Yay! You're back! I absolutely LOVED this chapter! Very hot and romantic! I can't wait for more!!
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  • From freelke on September 10, 2007
    Yay I am so glad you are back ! I look forward to your updates even more now :) This chapter was great and i can't wait to see what you have in store!Please post the next chapter very soon, I love this story!!!
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  • From freelke on September 03, 2007
    I DO hope you decide to continue this story, I adore it!
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  • From potcfan on September 01, 2007
    I love this story. Please, please, please, please write some more!!!
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  • From freelke on August 27, 2007
    please please please write some more of this great story, I love reading it so much. Hope you can find some time to add another chpter , I will keep checking :)
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  • From missdanielle01 on July 28, 2007
    omg i love it , the marriage was very unexpected....lol but i LOVE IT!! please write more, niceee :D
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  • From Ventoux on July 28, 2007
    Lazy-ass Ventoux finally created an account here LOL.I really love your story,it's amazing; the humor is great and so very Jack, the smut is hot and both Jack and Liz are IC. Much more than in AWE IMO.
    There are many stories(some which are great though) where jack and liz go off on another crazy adventure, magic, sea-monsters and whatnot insure and then they hook up.
    A story without all the supernatural elements ,which instead focus on the characters and their relationship, are so re-freshing, no monster, no curses,(and best of all no Will) just Jack and Liz and the relationship between them onboard the Pearl.
    Some times you don't need all kinds of crazy shemes, adventures and so on to create an interesting and good story and your story is a great example of just that. Looking forward to next update....
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