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By : Jawala39
  • From royalpinkdogs on November 06, 2007
    I am loving this one! And I'm so grateful that you write often and add to the story. What a delightful development---although the image of Cap't Jack changing a diaper is a bit more than I can tolerate, frankly. Should be interesting!!
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  • From briarlily on November 06, 2007
    Adorable! Now go and write more, we all love this fic.
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  • From UndeadMonkey on November 06, 2007
    Awwh, a lovely chapter. Haha Jack getting all annoyed at the female gossiping. I bet that's one thing Lizzie misses. I kinda guessed that's what would be up with her, life on a ship isn't teh most convinient and it often messed up the women's cycle.
    Loved the chapter!
    x x x x
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  • From briarlily on November 05, 2007
    Please update! I'm checking each day.
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  • From freelke on November 01, 2007
    I can't wait for the next chapter, the anticipation !!!
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  • From tinamonic on October 26, 2007
    Hey! I absolutely LOVED this chapter as well as the last! I am so glad you are updating more frequently! I was starting to worry! Update soon! Can't wait for more!
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  • From wisenedwonders on October 25, 2007
    Awww! I love this story so much. It's so cute, your doing a bloody brilliant job at it! Sorry I haven't reviewed before, but now that I have the time...

    Your doing an amazing job! So descriptive, Jack actually is a human being with feelings! I love that! And Elizabeth wants child...and Jack comforting her. It's so precious!!! Please update as soon as your able!


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  • From royalpinkdogs on October 24, 2007
    I'm loving this story for so many reasons--chief among them the complete lack of reserve or shame about the body. Of a certainty, Cap'n Jack Sparrow would be a hedonist and a sensualist. And that we can take the innocent images given us by Disney, and the beauty of Johnny Depp, and create stories such as this one and many of the others on this site allowing our thoughts to run wild is a joy. Thank you for creating this story and letting all of us go along for the dream. Royalpinkdogs.
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  • From amandamichelle8 on October 23, 2007
    Oh this was such a sweet chapter!!
    I've been grumpy all day because I saw you updated this morning and I didnt have time to read it. LOL

    Cant wait for the next chapter! :)
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  • From freelke on October 23, 2007
    YAY I/m so glad you posted another chapter! my whole crappy day just got better. I love reading everything you write. every chapter is better than the one before it. I cant wait to see what you have in mind next!
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  • From briarlily on October 23, 2007
    I love it! Love it! Now continue before I go insane!
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  • From UndeadMonkey on October 23, 2007
    Awwh such a sweet chapter seriously. Felt so sorry for Lizzie, I dont know why but it pains me when women so desperately want and can't have a baby. Especially when there are some of us who cant and dont want to (yet) :( Hopefully she'll get pregnant. Jack was amazingly sweet to her, he really loves her but typical Jack glad that he isn't the one with the problem. I always thought a man would take it worse than a woman.
    Can't wait for the next update!
    x x x x
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  • From Ventoux on October 23, 2007
    That was a beautilful and emotional chapter. I loved it. I'm feel so sorry for them, I hope they will find a way to solve this. I know I've said so before, but I really like the originality of the story. I don't think I've ever read a JE fic where they both want to have child and then can't. And you keep the both IC so it works perfectly. Bravo.
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  • From freelke on October 23, 2007
    I can't wait for the next installment. New chaptpers make my day!
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  • From freelke on October 22, 2007
    please please update this story, I want to know what you have in sotre next!!!!
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