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By : Jawala39
  • From on December 29, 2007
    Wow, that was intense. I suppose I guessed it. It's interesting how many fans see Jack as having suffered a lot of trauma in his life, maybe to explain why a nice and seemingly at least somewhat educated guy like him would become a pirate. Or why he has those big, wounded Depp-eyes.
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  • From tinamonic on December 27, 2007
    Loved it! There's so much emotion that I can't take it! Loved the story that Jack told! So sad. I love seeing the softer, vulnerable side of Jack and you nailed it! Great job! Can't wait for more!
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  • From akathetoad on December 22, 2007
    I'm not sure how I feel about this chapter. It was beautifully written as always, and very realistically described, but I'm not sure if I found it realistic for Jack or Lizzie. I had to remind myself who the characters were as I read. I still eagerly anticipate more, though.
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  • From freelke on December 19, 2007
    o, I loved it so much, I waited so patiently for this chapter and I was not disappointed. I look forward to the next one already. Please post again soon, I can't get enough of this story. I loved the emotionally charged nature of this chapter but I look forward to some more romance too
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  • From bitsodrama on December 19, 2007
    I love this story. Thank you for writing it and I can't wait to read more.
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  • From jackspeapod on December 19, 2007
    all I can say - LOVE it very much^^
    This was bloody wonderful, mate
    plz update soon^^
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  • From wisenedwonders on December 19, 2007
    Aw. I felt so bad for Jack. His past is so heart-breaking...and dark. But I loved it anyways. You are very creative!!!

    I think that Jack would actually break down...not very often...but he IS human, just like everyone else. He has feelings, and can feel pain.

    I think you wrote both very well. They were wonderfully in character. And I am glad Elizabeth forgave him.

    Update soon! I love this story.
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  • From AliceSparrow on December 19, 2007
    Aaw.. Jack.. you poor soul =( I really felt sorry for him and am glad Lizzie forgave him.. Beautiful chapter! Loved it!
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  • From on December 13, 2007
    I reread this and something occurred to me...it seems significant that Jack had been anally raped, and spoke of how awful it was...and then didn't treat Elizabeth as he should have, as though something took him over. I'm wondering if there is a subtext here that the past rape of Jack affected him subconsciously and influenced his behavior? Is he going to achieve a sort of revelation about this? Just musing.

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  • From on December 12, 2007
    Hi there...OK, you said another chapter soon and I hope you mean it because this spat needs to come to an end! =) Sigh. Those two crazy kids need to stop trying the back door because E seems to definitely prefer the front! Or they need to read William Burroughs for some tips. hehe

    I have one small technical question...Elizabeth says stop it, later Jack says she didn't say "stop" and Elizabeth thinks, he is right, she didn't say stop. But she did. Does Jack needs to get the wax out of his ears or does Elizabeth needs a memory jog? Or both?


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  • From akathetoad on December 11, 2007
    OOh, you reached new and amazing climaxes! (Forgive the pun, I'm thoroughly ashamed already.) I love that they're still finding contention between them. I'll forgive you for not posting sooner. I can't wait for more, you're so bloody brilliant!
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  • From wisenedwonders on December 10, 2007
    *Faints* Oh dear Lord! I absolutely LOVED the beginning, and how Lizzie trusted him enough to do that...at first.

    And then she got mad at him. *Pouts* And now their upset at each other...or Elizabeth's just...*Shrugs*

    Update soon! I loved it!!!! I wanna see how they resolve this!
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  • From freelke on December 10, 2007
    YAY, it seemed like it was forever since the last chapter, but it was SOOO much worth the wait. PLEASE put up the next chapter very soon. I love this story so much I can't wait. Thanks for thissi wonderful story!
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  • From AliceSparrow on December 09, 2007
    I have NEVER EVER felt anysort of hate for Jack before, until NOW! I can't believe how he treated Lizzie! What a selfish arrogant bastard! I HATE HIM SO MUCH RIGHT NOW!! (in this fic) Lizzie deserves so much better ;(
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  • From UndeadMonkey on December 08, 2007
    Oh poor Jack, poor Lizzie. She did ask him to stop, kinda, and he did treat her abit like a doxy. But...I dunno, Jack loves her. Doesn't he? How are they gonna sort this out? Can't wait to find out!
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