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By : Jawala39
  • From Ventoux on March 05, 2008
    LOL, I really laughed hard during Jack and Lizzie's little argument, poor guy, can't do anything right. And poor Elizabeth, having no control over her body.I like how you made Jack feel both happy and terrified with the prospect of becoming a father, must be a guy thing,it's not the first time I've heard about men getting all weird in the head about being a dad(even our Delicious Mr Depp, reportedly, freaked out)
    He should talk to Lizzie though, she is probably scared/nervous herself.
    Wonderful chapter, as always.
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  • From Ventoux on February 23, 2008
    YAY, Baby Sparrow *does happydance* Aww, Daddy Jack *melts*. I'm so happy for them. Now, will it be a boy or a girl? I vote for a little girl with her daddy's eyes. Great chapter as always.

    “Shhh! M’thinkin’.”

    For some reason that made me laugh so hard.I'm still giggeling everytime I read it.
    Looking forward to the next update.
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  • From freelke on February 21, 2008
    I'm so glad you wrote another chapter. I had almost given up hope, but I keep checking anyway :) I loved this chapter, I can't wait to see what angst you come up with next!!!! great job!
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  • From Seralyn on February 20, 2008
    loved your new chapter they finnally managed to do it!!!!

    Jack keeps saying him wonder if he is right...

    hope to see more soon.

    Cheers
    Sera
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  • From akathetoad on February 20, 2008
    Aww, it's so sweet. I'm all happylike for them. :-)
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  • From wisenedwonders on February 19, 2008
    OMG! She's pregnant! Finally, it happened! And now Jack will be...a father! OMG OMG!!!

    I love this story, I really do! You HAVE to update soon! No, SOONER that soon!

    Please?
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  • From royalpinkdogs on February 19, 2008
    oh! lovely! I love your story! Too perfect! It's gonna be so much fun to go through a pregnancy with them! THANKS FOR THE OPPORTUNITY!!
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  • From Seralyn on February 11, 2008
    Just read your whole storie luv it

    hope to see more soon

    Cheers
    Sera
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  • From wisenedwonders on February 08, 2008
    Oh my God. That has to be the best chapter I've ever read! They're both acting silly, what with Jack trying to take care of her but being a little too harsh and Elizabeth not realizing that he loves her so much and wants to help her.

    Loved the ending! It was HILARIOUS! Great job!

    Update soon, I want to see what happens next!
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  • From on February 07, 2008
    Fun chapter! I'm looking forward to these two getting along better though...no squabbling for at least one chapter! ::grin::

    PS I think Liz has a bun in the oven.
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  • From tinamonic on February 04, 2008
    I absolutely loved it! It was well worth the wait! Thanks for writing another fantastic chapter!
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  • From Ventoux on February 03, 2008
    Hahahaha, Elizabeth you minx. Poor Jack, having to give his (lucky?) crew a lovely wiev of his gorgeous ass. I sure hell wouldn't mind seeing that...*has naughty thoughts*...I blame that hot smut scene...ahem...Elizabeth is pregnant isn't she? Aww,now Jack will be even more protective, he is so sweet when he is worried.
    Lovely chapter as always, so worth the wait (Did Jack's "entertaining" help your muse *wink*?)
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  • From unknownsoldier on February 02, 2008
    Thats just plain evil on Lizzies part....but I LOVE It!!!
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  • From royalpinkdogs on February 01, 2008
    oh--too wonderful! WHAT GLORIOUS REVENGE! Your writing is superb--and I always look for your updates. THANKS!
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  • From freelke on January 22, 2008
    I don't think I'll make it till you update again. I can't wait! I look forward to you next installment, very suspenseful :)
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