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By : Jawala39
  • From royalpinkdogs on June 28, 2008
    oh thank you! How wonderful! And I hope your RL improves--perhaps by spending as much time as possible in the world of Lizzie and Jack, you might survive the realities pressing upon you! Take care--RPD
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  • From Ventoux on June 28, 2008
    *melts* Jack has to be the sweetest guy ever. So considerate and trying to protect Lizzie and Jr. Hehehe, persuasion indeed. Good to see Lizzie coming around and taking a bit care of poor Jack (I can do that too you know *wink*) All in all, another great and lovely chapter about our fav couple who are soon to be parents - how soon btw? I can't wait to see if it's a boy or a girl...:)
    Good to have you back and again, I'm sorry RL is being such a bitch *graps baseballbat and chases after RL*. Looking forward to the next chapter and thank for not abandoning the story, it's one of my favs.
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  • From royalpinkdogs on June 26, 2008
    Ahoy-matey--it be many weeks since ye added to yer story, and we be in want of more of it! Aye!

    I do hope all is well with you--but I really do want to know how this all unfolds! Thanks--RPD
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  • From PrincessofthePearl on June 10, 2008
    I absolutely love this story. I hope you update soon!
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  • From royalpinkdogs on May 29, 2008
    uh---where's the next chapter?

    are we gonna have to wait NINE MONTHS to know what happens next?

    I myself prefer premature things---that instant gratification stuff, you know.

    so--please!! MORE MORE MORE!! I love the dynamics you've established for Lizzie and Jack--can't wait to know about Jack as a Daddy.
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  • From Jacksfavoritewench on May 25, 2008
    I really like this story! Jack and Elizabeth are so great together! Too bad Disney didn't see it that way though! Thanks for writting such a wonderful story!

    JackSparrowsWench
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  • From Ventoux on April 11, 2008
    Lovely chapter. I adored Jack's little chat with his son, eh, daughter. Daddy Jack really melts my heart, he is soo sweet and huggable. I can't wait to see what happens once the baby is born (I'm with Lizzie, should be a girl *puppy eyes*).
    Looking forward to the next update.
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  • From AddictedToJack on April 11, 2008
    Another great chapter:)

    Poor things want this sooooo much and they end up talking stories and falling asleep,lol!
    Hope it will change soon,though!Want some J/E goodness!And I pity Jack so much for having only his fist for a company:)

    I admire your story,I strated reading in on sparrabeth website last summer ,and then found it here after discovering aff!It's one of the best J/E fics I've ever read,so please go on and update asap!!!

    It's my first review for "Unforgivable" since I'm a new member:)
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  • From freelke on April 10, 2008
    such a gerat surprise to see a new chapter. Wonderful as always! I still adore every chapter of this story and I already can't wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From royalpinkdogs on April 10, 2008
    as always--superb! this story is too wonderful--I await each new chapter breathlessly. Just please--let's have a happy continuance--no tragedies or disasters! Let them have a happy, horny life together!
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  • From on March 23, 2008
    Phooey, turns out your story doesn't fit the category for which I nominated it. Ah well, the thought was there... :/

    I am looking forward to more of the J/E love from you...poor Jack needs a break. We don't see a lot of Heavily Pregnant Sex in fanfic...hmmm...not that I'd ever drop hints...no...
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  • From on March 19, 2008
    I nominated this story in the PoTC Votes awards in the Long Series category. :)
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  • From akathetoad on March 14, 2008
    Haa haa haa, poor poor Jack. And Lizzie of course, but that's an uncomfortable given.
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  • From wisenedwonders on March 06, 2008
    Oh my gosh! That's great! Poor Jack, being yelled at and having to deal with a sobbing, angry female. And everything he does seems to be wrong.

    I loved this chapter! Great job!

    I hope you update soon! It was wonderfully written!
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  • From Seralyn on March 06, 2008
    great chapter!!!

    being 5 months pregnant i can SOOOOOOOOOO relate LOL

    keep up the good work hope to see another cahpter soon

    Cheers
    Sera
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