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By : Jawala39
  • From freelke on June 14, 2007
    YAY!! Im so happy you wrote another chapter. I know you are very busy, but it makes my entire week when there is a new chapter to this wonderful story. You're a great writer and I CANNOT wait till you post again. Please don't make it as long between chapters as before, I might die :)
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  • From freelke on June 11, 2007
    you haven't update in like 100,000 years :( Just kidding I love this story I hope you decide to pick it back up. Its one of teh stries I check regularly for
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  • From GueritaSalome on June 07, 2007
    Absolutely beautifully done! I hope you continue this story very soon.
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  • From freelke on June 05, 2007
    Please update this story very soon, its one of my favorites!
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  • From jacobslove on June 04, 2007
    Aww yay. :) Keep up the good work.
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  • From freelke on June 01, 2007
    Please write another chapter to this story. I love it so much and there are no others like it out there.
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  • From SassySparrow on May 30, 2007
    Oi! Seems that Jack made a decision! :o)
    Loved this chapter - especially when Jack lost the blanket *LOL*
    Take care,
    ~Sassy~
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  • From freelke on May 29, 2007
    YAY! I have been checking everyday for an uupdate. Please don;t forget about this story, it is so wonderful. One of my all time favorites. Please get another chpater up again very soon. I love your writing and this story has me on the edge of my seat. Please update again soon, it would make me very happy. I will keep looking and hoping for a new chapter
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  • From freelke on May 23, 2007
    PLEASE update this story, I check all the time and I can't wait for the next well-writen chapter. You are very talented
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  • From jacobslove on May 15, 2007
    LOVE IT !:)
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  • From freelke on May 14, 2007
    Wonderful chapter, This is one of my favorite stories of all time. My only wish is that you updated more often, I am in suspense! Thanks for the great story to follow.
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  • From jackspeapod on May 14, 2007
    absolutly funny chapter!
    luv it ;O)
    thx for that
    ~jacks_peapod~
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  • From Kimmie on May 13, 2007
    Im liking this story. Its mostly just been smut more than plot but when its done properly (like this) it can be good. Im glad you are at least starting to put a little bit of plot into it. Will this be updated?
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  • From UndeadMonkey on May 11, 2007
    Ahh that was class lol. I loved it, fel sorry for Lizzie though when Jack wouldn't let on what was happening. Keep writing, it was great!
    xxxx
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  • From SassySparrow on May 11, 2007
    Beautiful, just beautiful.
    You described a very tender moment between the two and I like the end of this chapter ;o) Definitely a safe time for them ;o))))))
    Thanks so much for this new chapter!
    Take care,
    ~Saskia~
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