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Reviews for Chiva

By : Zellezra
  • From JulieL on May 02, 2007
    Yay Anthea. That'll teach them to pick on a human. I wonder what will happen with Kro'nha and Anthea now. Will Ko'tak and Syt'ka rekindle their friendship?

    So many questions.

    Great Chappie Zellezra

    P.s Thank you for you review too. I hope to up date within the next few weeks with a new chapter and some changes to current chapters. I hope, unless life has other ideas. Which sometimes we all know it usually does.
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  • From MuseofScrolls on May 02, 2007
    Wow...impressive action scenes, Zel, hun. Such challenges put forth for our heroine and hero. And in the end, the bad blood received his comeuppance. Well done on the defeat, and can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From LordZain on May 01, 2007
    Hot, sexy, action packed and filled with anticipation. Love the Story Babe. Look forward to seeing what else you got in that beautiful mind of yours.

    I give it a 10 out of 10!

    Lord Zain
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  • From JulieL on May 01, 2007
    When the little girl told them what clan she was from I thought "YES." And I had to laugh about the seeing Anthea naked bit. Personally Kro' would probably want to see her naked again. LOL

    I hope that nasty Tal'lik gets a taste of his own medicine.

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  • From MuseofScrolls on April 28, 2007
    Very nice update, hun! Kro and Anthea are so cute! And the other clan seems bent out of shape. Looking forward to more!
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  • From JulieL on April 26, 2007
    Hhhmm, I don't like the sound of this other clan. They seem they'd go off at an insect being killed near their boundaries. I hope they don't return.

    Isn't young love beautiful!

    Love the chappie.
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  • From DeathGodDist on April 22, 2007
    Hey, this story is nicely written. You've done a good job introducing your key characters and slowly building up their development. I look forward to more of this one.
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  • From on April 07, 2007
    You have the making of a great story here so please continue.
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  • From MuseofScrolls on April 02, 2007
    I like what you're doing with the story, Zel. The first chapter really set up a great background for Anthea, and the second chapter's setting description and revealing more about Anthea, Ko'tak and Kro'nha were excellent. And now, with this chapter we see a bit more involvement between Anthea and Kro'nha. Very interesting. Looking forward to reading more when you are able to update. ^_^
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  • From Keen on March 24, 2007
    Glad to be inspiration, but it’s not as if you needed it. Your writing is very fine, wonderfully descriptive. Good deal.
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  • From Zellezra on March 22, 2007
    I'll remember to do so. ^_^ It helps very much so. Thank you for your review.
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  • From RedWine on March 22, 2007
    This sounds very interesting and I would like to read more.

    I just have one request. Please space out your paragraphs. Sometimes when stories are written like this I am afraid if I lose my place I will never find it again. Spacing makes it easier to read.

    I hope this helps you. FAB
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