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By : tinamonic
  • From UndeadMonkey on May 05, 2007
    Okay, I straight up admit it: I cried. Lol, your fanfict is just amazing. I was so amazed when I saw you had updated and I wasn't disappointed! Amazing chapter, great character development. Worth the wait.
    Please update soon :] I miss J/E but how on earth are they going to sort this out if Jack is leaving and Lizzie is with Will? Hmm...you're a great writer, I'm sure you'll suprise me =D
    Again, well written, I love your story!
    xxxx
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  • From UndeadMonkey on April 20, 2007
    Ahh! I have waited for this update 2 weeks now, and by God, it was well worth the wait. I have to say I still love the contrasting points of view. I totally love your story, one of my favourites actually. I hope you like your comments I leave haha I try to make them good but I suck at writing. But yeh anyway, that woman...hmm...Im gonna go read it again about another 100 times hehe. At first I thought Lizzie was going to run to Will and have sex with him,in hope Will would tell Jack and make him jealous >=] Haha Im evil! I hope you update soon, I wanna know what happens! Please dont leave it too long, I'll get withdrawal symptoms =[
    Great story!
    chelsea x
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  • From SassySparrow on April 08, 2007
    No! Oh no! What ARE they doing?!?!?!?!?
    You better continue that - what a heartbreaking chapter - excellent work, mate!
    ~Saskia~
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  • From IllyrianWench on April 07, 2007
    *GASP* Oh, that was horrible! Boy, does Jack fight dirty....unfortunately she deserved every word. I can't wait to see how you work out the next chapters.
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  • From UndeadMonkey on April 07, 2007
    *bangs head against table* NO NO NO NO NO NO!!!!!! Why do they both have to be so stubborn? Your chapter had me in tears again! Please update soon Im dying to see what you have coming up! I had the feeling Jack was gonna smash the gift or maybe Lizzie would but I guess Jack wants it as a souvinir? I hope they make up and I hope Jack realizes she isnt just a bed buddy (cool saying!)
    Great writing, characters are really in context and emotions are there! Please update soon I think Ill die if i dont find out what happens soon lol
    xxxx
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  • From UndeadMonkey on April 02, 2007
    NO no no no no no no!!!! You are evil! What a place to stop lol, Im now dying from curiousity about what comes next. *mumbles about being fanfict obsessed*
    Anyway....great chapter! I loved it; the emotions in it were great, the characters were in context and you could just feel exactly what the characters were thinking and the different points of view were great! But the one question is; Will Jack and Lizzie still be together after this night? They both need to realize they want each other; Jack needs to acknowledge she's not just a bed buddy and she needs to realize Jack does have feelings and her being with the Whelp breaks his heart!
    Amazing fancit, update quickly!!!!!
    chelsea x
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  • From UndeadMonkey on March 30, 2007
    Eeek, Lizzie's got herself in a mess. I hope Jack does forgive her though and gets his present, Im sure he'll love it. Cant wait for more!
    chelsea x
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  • From blankpage on March 28, 2007
    I really like your story. Your writing style is awesome, and I love how you stay true to the characters personalities. I look forward to reading more!
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  • From JessSwann on March 27, 2007
    hello !! I'm french and I love your story !!! I hope read another chapter soon !! Bye !!
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  • From UndeadMonkey on March 26, 2007
    Awwh, i feel so sorry for Jack. Lizzie is playing them both, not on purpose ofcourse, its not her fault she doesnt know what she wants. But you could literally feel Jacks heart breaking. I hope they settle it!
    chelsea x
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  • From Femmevixen13 on March 26, 2007
    Ah the suspense! Silly Lizzie, really... there is only one choice. Ach... falling back in love with William, nooooooo! Anyway, now that my sparrabeth outburst has subsided, I love your writing, can't wait for more! ;D
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  • From freelke on March 18, 2007
    please update with another chapter soon, I love this story
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  • From rtms on March 12, 2007
    Love the story so far, you have such great love scenes! I really hope Elisabeth dumps Will because I can't stand the guy. Jack and Elisabeth are the best couple. Look forward to reading more.
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