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By : tinamonic
  • From nmos on July 05, 2007
    you should definitely update soon!
    it's really good. but I hate when people are in fights!
    even just for pretend.
    it makes the story more interesting, but I wish one of them would just admit that they can't take it any more.
    I can't.
    :(

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  • From ANON - Danielle on June 29, 2007
    hey i love it , hell i love the whole story, u really gotta keep writing this, i LOVE It
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  • From ANON - Maria on June 23, 2007
    Hi! I found your story yesterday... and I must tell you that I couldn't stop reading LOL
    It's excellent and well written. The characters are so real!
    I can't wait for another Jack and elizabeth hot encounter LOL

    I know that you have the story already, but I would love to give you some ideas for inspiration.
    I will like to see jack more jelouse and acting on it.. even though he always tend to avoid issues.
    It will be fun to see these two in a situation of danger, or maybe as prissiones, but still mad at each other
    and, I think Jack has to win elizabeth heart, because I feel that he has been very passive in that matter, and I hope Elizabeth won't put it that easily to him. He has to work harder. He has to fight for her, not only against Will, but also against her too
    and also to see elizabeth more harsh and cruel... he deserves it.. and also please don't break Will heart.. I think maybe you can find him another woman, so he dump ellizabeth instead

    I hope you don't mind that I'm telling you this, they are just silly sugestions. You are an excellent writter, and I will like to continue reading your work.

    Keep the good work!! I'm a Fan ;)
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  • From ANON - howlongmustiwait on June 21, 2007
    Ooooooo, I like. Reminds me of the scene in pergatory when he reveals that Lizzie killed him. OUCH.
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  • From UndeadMonkey on June 21, 2007
    I loved it, loved it, loved it! But like alot of your chapters Im in tears again. You have a way of making you cry, I love your story so much. It pains me to wait for your next chapter lol. Im begging you, really, please please please let Jack and Elizabeth make up!?!?!? That was a pretty heated argument and both said some nasty things but thats because they're both hurting and are both upset. Is Will gonna find out? Whats gonna happen? I just NEED them to end up together, I didn't get my sparrabeth ending in AWE I atleast need it in your amazing fanfict!
    Again, brilliant writing, amazingly heartbreaking!
    Keep writing
    x x x x
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  • From ANON - heley on June 21, 2007
    omg!! i nearly jumped out of my seat when i saw that you had updated! omg i cant wait to see what happens next..she is dumb for blaming all this on jack...when its her fault in the first place...and jack even warned her....god i just want to strangle her right now..but u must update! you must lol a week from now..i can handle that
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  • From freelke on June 20, 2007
    wonderful as usual. my only wish is that you updated more requently, but I'm sure you have a life, unlike me :)
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  • From ANON - Danielle on June 13, 2007
    OMg i really love this story, i just started reading it a couple days ago, and im now finished, i cant wait to read the next chapter, and i lve the risk to shag again, love that to, cant wait to read more. peace.
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  • From jackspeapod on June 07, 2007
    what goes around - comes around...
    don't you agree?
    Wonderful chapter - thx mate,
    ~jacks_peapod~
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  • From UndeadMonkey on June 07, 2007
    YAY!!! Couldnt believe you updated, you made my day :] Loved the chapter, I was hoping the girl was Lizabeth but yeah...:P I wonder who it is ;] I want her and Jack to talk or shout or interact haha I love their arguing/conversations. Keep writing, I love your story. I want to see how/if they work it out.
    BTW do you prefer comments on here or email reviews? Just curious
    xxxx
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  • From ANON - Haley on June 06, 2007
    I think AWE was wonderful! I was so happy that Will was out of the picture for most of the time. I swear she should go have some fun with Jack while Will is gone. I know she is still wondering what it wouldve been like to fuck him and everything that goes with it. I know I would. I , however, would not have picked Will in the first place...

    Anywho, I absolutley love your story!!! Awesome job. Please please please post soon!!!
    Cant wait to see what happens next. I swear to god that if Lizzie doesnt go with jack, I will strangle her.
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  • From freelke on June 06, 2007
    wonderful as always. you are consistantly wonderful to read. Please post again soon, I check very often
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  • From UndeadMonkey on May 25, 2007
    Ahhh!!!!!!! I was so happy when I saw this updated. I've missed your story alot, please please please update soon! Loved it!
    xxxx
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  • From ANON - Lady on May 17, 2007
    You're sorry for the W/E part!!! Im an avid J/E fan but i would have liked that scene to go further. I almost screamed when you switched back to Jack, (would've if my older bro wasnt home lol)
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  • From jackspeapod on May 06, 2007
    First I was a little bit concerned about W/E, but I trust you for
    more J/E. However I can't see a way that Jack and Liz come together again.
    ...poor Jack - I think I know what you're planing next (let you know if I was right!!!)...
    Thx for this wonderful story
    ~jacks_peapod~
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