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Reviews for Her Master's House

By : Vivvian
  • From Finality on September 21, 2009
    fantastic.
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  • From Sidney on May 10, 2007
    This is one of the best Red Eye fanfics I've ever read. Love how you wrote the characters and the dynamic of their relationship. And of course, the steamy scenes between them are the best I've read, love how you built up the tension between them, the reader can really feel it. I hope you write more soon, I am particularly curious about how they got together in the first place and what happened after he got her from Utah. BTW, I've also read Reset and loved it too. You are officially my new favorite author... Great work!!
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  • From shockvaluegr on January 21, 2007
    Ahhh... resolution. A lovely, sexy conversation that only these two could have, puncutated by all the sensual touches as they lie in bed.

    Jackson's thoughts in particular here are just right on. What he wants to tell Lisa but won't - and why he won't - is simply marvelous. Yes, he would think that... he would have to.

    Beautiful! And I do hope there will be more from you...;) Writers who truly understand the psychology of Jackson are in pitifully short supply, and I think you have nailed him. Please say there will be more!
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  • From shockvaluegr on January 21, 2007
    Each chapter gets better and better!

    Your insight into these two minds as they struggle to come to terms with an unusual and powerful attraction is literally awe-inspiring.

    "She took him in, like an artist absorbs her fine work – the exquisite detail of him, the hellish safety inherent in his icy gaze, the alabaster bodies of the newly dead piled behind him as if he were statue, painting and narrative in one. Her heart broke then for what she wanted – because it wasn’t good. He wasn’t good."

    Amazing stuff! And then, the hot sex... where Jack finally stops being the expert cunt-tease he is and gives her the goods. Steamy and electrifying!

    Fantastic!
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  • From shockvaluegr on January 21, 2007
    This is just gorgeous writing... so much more than your average PWP fic.

    Little things like this make this fic-

    "His voice was soft as he drank his beer, his other hand in his pocket, his jacket pushed back from his waist, putting his hips in beautiful relief."

    Wow- that is so visual and beautiful! In this fic, the reader truly becomes Lisa, from every conflicting emotion to each vividly drawn physical sensation she experiences - and with Jackson, they run the gamut from pain to pleasure, don't they...?

    More, more!
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  • From ANON - Allie on January 11, 2007
    woah, when I first started reading I thought the whole not peeing thing was gonna make me really uncomfortable and stop me from enjoying this story but I'm amazed. Very very well written I'm on the edge of my seat. Please post another chapter for my sake if nothing else.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 10, 2007
    Great so far...update quick
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  • From ANON - sybil on January 10, 2007
    Very promising. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Pisces on January 07, 2007
    Whoa... Jackson remains the expert manipulator we all know and love! This is very well done - superb dialogue and sexy touches like Jackson hiding his own tension from Lisa... this has to be going somewhere good! Can't wait for more!!
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