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By : JacksMermaid
  • From ANON - RussianRouletteKiss on January 03, 2007
    That was awesome!! I can't wait for more. :-)
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  • From ANON - Anni on January 03, 2007
    Very good! Jack's voice, both speech and thoughts, is very much in character. While Eliz. wasn't portrayed as quite so forward in CBP, I like your version of her. One thing, I think the word that you meant to say is "ravish," not "ravage". 'Ravish' has that sexual connotation that you wanted, but 'ravage' is more 'to damage'.
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  • From ANON - soph on January 03, 2007
    wow, i absolutely loved it, well seen as you're the author of "Silk" which is another amzing story, I did expect this to be the same and it most definately was! I love the way you describe their feelings, and I also love a wanton Elizabeth, because it's so funny, and probaly quite true. Jack holding back is cute, and you can really feel sorry for him when he's trying his best not to ravish her. I also like how you play it slow, and not rush into things, because i've read many of these island scenes and they go wayyyy to fast for my liking. But you handled this well.

    I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and i can't wait for your next chapter...I stay up really late so maybe i can read it tonight?? hhehehe. well done
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  • From ANON - Ziva on January 03, 2007
    The lock in doesn't work, no idea why. Anyway, I LOVE your story. Jack trying to behave himself is so hilarious (and kinda cute). But I'm sure Lizzie will find a way to persuade him into more lessons. *grins wickedly*
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