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By : Pilgrim
  • From ANON - stipje on January 07, 2007
    Chapter 18, it is... =p
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  • From ANON - stipje on January 07, 2007
    Thanks, I'll go back and read those extra paragraphs =)

    You've already written some of the next chapter, haven't you?
    (or have you already written the whole thang?)

    Either way, post some more! I wanna know what Oria is up to...
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  • From ANON - Michelle on January 06, 2007
    I've just finished reading your Oria's series from Oria's Tale to Twisted Views. I must say I couldn't stop reading it. It is a very enjoyable story to read and I cannot wait to read more about Jack and Oria. Oria's character and situation is original and refreshing and because of Oria's family history her character is believable. I know she is pure evil but I've become attached to her and have been rooting for her to kick some ass!! Now current chapter 18 review. I really felt sorry for Oria when Jack strayed...Also loved how she handled things with the doctors medicine. Very clever...I am very curious to see just how they are going to work things out. Bad Jack!!! Please update soon and I will review....I'm definately hooked and keep the chapters coming!!!
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  • From Pilgrim on January 05, 2007
    Hey, thanks stipje for pointing out the rather drastic lack of continuity, many apologies. I have corrected it, there are a few extra small paragraphs on the end of Chapter 17 explaining the whole mug and herb thing (it didn't upload them the last time stupid internet!) I also realised that my not-so-darling sister has changed the file names on my computer meaning I posted the draft for Chapter 18 and not the real thing. Okay so there wasn't much difference in them but some of it's changed making it flow a bit better.

    In answer to what's Oria planning the answer is...

    Well you'll just have to keep reading to find out won't you ;D lol

    All will become clear in a few chapters my darlings


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  • From ANON - stipje on January 05, 2007
    Ha! Okidoki then =D

    *slightly confused* When did she put the herbs in AnaMaria's mug?
    Guess she's jealeous, hm?
    What's her reply to Jack gonna be?
    I still haven't figured out what her true motives are...
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  • From ANON - stipje on January 05, 2007
    Anytime luv, if only internet would've let me done it sooner =p
    AnaMaria, hm? Bloody bastard, can't last two weeks...





    (Just so you know, I'm a crappy reviewer, so most of my comments will
    be directed at the content of the chapter ;) )
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  • From ANON - stipje on January 03, 2007
    Phew... Spent the last week catching up on all your writing!
    Bloody brilliant... Gotta love that imagination of yours!
    Good thing you're updating quite regularly, I'm not known for my patience ;)
    Don't entirely understand yet what Oria's getting at, at the moment...
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  • From ANON - mar1966 on December 29, 2006
    Wow, I missed quite a lot of action over the last few days!!

    Poor Sarah, I didn't expect that at all.

    Can't wait to see how this all pans out!

    Great updates!
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  • From ANON - mar1966 on December 23, 2006
    Da-da-daaaaaa!!

    I love a good cliffhanger!!!

    You busted me out! I'm supposed to be cleaning house like a madwoman for company tomorrow. Shhh...don't tell anyone!

    It is rather lonely being the only reviewer here.

    *grabs random reader* You there, get to reviewing or I'll keelhaul the lot of you!
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  • From ANON - mar1966 on December 19, 2006
    Wow, this is a really great story. I really like the way it's turning out, you're doing a bang-up job!

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - mar1966 on December 11, 2006
    So HOT!!

    Excellent work!! Worth every effort!!

    More please!!
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