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Reviews for When the Rum Runs Out

By : Ladykohl
  • From ANON - DesiringPirates on December 14, 2006
    I think you write Jack perfectly.
    And thank you, you made me cry! You better post that next chapter before I keelhaul you!!!
    I hope Lizzie's alright... but something tells me that she's not going to be...
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  • From ANON - heartjd on December 14, 2006
    Oh. My. God. You're CRUEL! You can't leave us hanging like that *puppy eyes*.
    I really loved the Jack/Liz exchange in the bed.

    Your Jack is perfect, he's exactly like I think he would be in that kind of situation. I love it when he's dark and heartbroken..

    And for ”They speak Spanish better.”, you took that from Johnny, right? ;)
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  • From ANON - Mina on December 11, 2006
    I hope this isnt the end of the story. It looks so. But its such a great story. Its sad and pleasent at the same time. If there are more possible chapters or sequels please do so. If you plan on more Jack and Elizabeth please post. You're a great writer. I wish you the best and hope you write more.
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  • From ANON - emeraldfire on December 10, 2006
    Hot!!!! Great story!
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  • From ANON - Capt on December 08, 2006
    I don''t usually leave comments but I've fallen in love with this story. It's sad, it's beautiful, it's funny, it's hot and it is very well written! I have a horrible feeling about this one though... :( I will comment more as the fic unfolds, please update speedily. :o)
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  • From ANON - Nessa on December 07, 2006
    WOW this is so Yummy, Plese update soon,
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  • From ANON - rejerito on December 07, 2006
    Oh oh.... I think I know what happens those months later.... And if it is what I think, I really don't like it!
    Jack wanted to use the cruelest punishment for Reed, he really loves her....
    And the end of the third part is just *thud!*
    Keep going! I'm loving this story!
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  • From ANON - DesiringPirates on December 06, 2006
    (Forgot to sign in... lol)
    I am so loving this story. This chapter especially, because it seems so Jack. He would never admit that he loved her, and Elizabeth coming to him, saying those things... GAH!
    I love this story! *still addicted* Update soon or I'll die! Well, maybe not die, but I'd be very put out for a bit. ^_^
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  • From ANON - sparrows_swann on December 06, 2006
    Oh WOW! It's heartbreaking, beautiful and HOT all at the same time! How did you do that? I LOVE the conversation between Jack and Lizzie when he finally tells her how he got branded. So beautiful and I could actually see that happening...very believable. And I love his desperation in the end when they finally get together....heartbreaking! Ugh, Jack just say you love her!!! You write him REALLY well.
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  • From ANON - Shad on December 06, 2006
    Well, I was hesitant to read this at first, but you really surprised me. It's wonderful, beautiful, and I will be delighted to see more, even though I have a feeling this is going to give me that good cry I've been needing.

    The only CC I can offer is that sometimes the POV changes a bit rapidly and is somewhat confusing as you switch third limited in the same scene. Can't give much else than that.
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  • From ANON - heartjd on December 06, 2006
    oh. my. god. This is so fuckin' great. *fans herself*
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  • From ANON - Trinity on December 05, 2006
    more more more please!!!
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  • From ANON - heartjd on December 04, 2006
    Nice chap!
    And I'm sure I won't be disappointed ;)
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  • From ANON - rejerito on December 04, 2006
    Poor Jack.... Elizabeth married to the whelp just breaks his heart....
    More! More! MORE!!! I'm loving this story!
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  • From DesiringPirates on December 04, 2006
    Uggh Elizabeth!! Why did you go and marry the whelp?!
    Great chapter update soon! I love your story! *still addicted*
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