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Reviews for When the Rum Runs Out

By : Ladykohl
  • From ANON - stricy on December 23, 2006
    Why are you STOPPING there?
    You better update soon - PLEASE
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  • From ANON - Kaylee on December 22, 2006
    This is an amazing story. Have no fear, your Jack and Elizabeth are spot on. I can't wait to see how it all turns out.
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  • From JacksMermaid on December 22, 2006
    Totally breaking my heart, here. Ironically, their "love me/ don't love me" falls in the same vein of something I was recently musing (ah, when personal life imitates art and comes out in the writing... bugger). Anyway. Really well done, I'm almost afraid to read the last chapter.
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  • From ANON - Jaymi on December 18, 2006
    Ohhhhhhh next chapter sooon pleeeeeeeeeaaaase!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Amanda on December 17, 2006
    wow. GREAT! Please update soon!! I can't wiat to finish reading this. Awesome fic. I love it.
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  • From ANON - ... on December 17, 2006
    speechless.

    best.fic.ever.

    update now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Shad on December 16, 2006
    Have I mentioned how well written this is?? Surely I have.

    Favorite line this time around: "Lizzie - his Lizzie... was not his Lizzie." It reads well and is in character. [no idea if the html tags will show in the reviews]

    Dark Jack ways leaves me with mixed feelings because we're so unused to seeing him serious and threatening--it's easy to forget he's a serious pirate, and when we're reminded, it can to feel uncomfortable, almost like it's out of character and awkward, but looking over this, right now, I think you're pretty in character with Jack. Though sometimes he might drop into a too good to be true nature, for the most part, he's our Jack Sparrow, so well done, and keep up the work.

    I have a feeling you may have woven some misdirection into this tale, so I'll be interested to see if you go with the avenue we're all suspecting or something quite different. Looking forward to the conclusion, and hopefully more awesome stories from you in the future.
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  • From ANON - soph on December 16, 2006
    omg omg omg.....you know your last chapter....it made me cry....so...much...like alot. omg. that was SO sad. and don't worry about staying in character, becuase i believe you are bringing out the darker side of jack that noone has properly seen. this was amazing, you have such a good talent i obviously envy. beautfiully wriiten. oh i can't waste for the next chapter....i hope jack comes to his sense and admits his feelings to her....oh this is such a good fic!!!!! i love you for aking this!!xxxxx
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 15, 2006
    OH wow. This is great. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Capt on December 15, 2006
    Oh I'm so glad you updated and yet sad that the story is coming to an end. :( Another wonderful chapter. I still hope for a happy-ish ending! Please...
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  • From ANON - rejerito on December 15, 2006
    NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! *follows Jack to the brig*
    I knew it! I knew it!!!!
    Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - Mina on December 15, 2006
    Oh wow! Im so excited about this chapter. You did an excellent job in staying in touch with the character. I always imagined Jack for his character to be like that in AWE after lizzie chains him up. Its still staying in character, Jack is still Jack, but we see him in a different light. He has depth in his character, and I think it should develop as time goes by and the situations he goes through. So, again, great job! Dont be scared lol, be proud of yourself!

    I really canot wait for the next chapter. What would Reed do to lizzie?! eek! Please continue! I love your story. I'll be anxiously waiting and checking everyday till you post :)
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  • From ANON - shel on December 15, 2006
    i freaking love this story. please update soon!
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  • From ANON - howlongmustiwait on December 14, 2006
    OH MY! I can guess but I don't want to - UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - Jo on December 14, 2006
    Ohhh, wow! That's a twist I wasn't expecting. I think I see where this is headed, and I don't like it one bit. haha I can't seem to stop reading, though! You write so well! Please update soon!
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