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Reviews for When the Rum Runs Out

By : Ladykohl
  • From UndeadMonkey on February 27, 2007
    Would you be willing to write like a follow on? Even if it is crap lol, because I liked the story so much and the idea that Elizabeth dies, but I would love to see your interpretation if they ever met up again, ie. What happens, whats said.
    Email me please :) x

    P.s-I was the first "chelsea" that replied above, just so you knew my feelings on the story (and didnt wanna type it again hehe)

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  • From ANON - chelsea on February 24, 2007
    Utterly asmazing! Is there a sequel!?
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  • From tinamonic on February 24, 2007
    Hey! T wanted to tell you that you have an absolutely terriffic story! I saw The Libertine also and realized that Jack and John Wilmont have a little similar qualities, but I believe that John is Jack to the 50th power! He scares me a little, but anyway I can't wait for part two to this story (please let there be a part 2! I've told my friends about your story!) I've enjoyed it and I love your writing. You are a terriffic writer! Great job! Take care!
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  • From ANON - chelsea on February 24, 2007
    I just wanted to finally (only just worked out how to sign up lol) tell you what an AMAZING story this is. I have honestly never cried so much over a story in my life. It was truly fabulous! You captured the characters so well and got all the emotions in there. I seriously cant get over how it made me feel, I could literally feel everything Jack felt; his happiness, his sorrow, his heartbreak, his anger. It was magnificant. Im still crying now lol. The last chapter broke my heart. And if theres going to be a sequel (or is there already one?) I would love to read it. I wish Lizzie didnt die but then the story wouldnt have been as powerful =[ And still the tears come....It was just the way Jack couldnt admit his feelings to her until it was too late. And that feels awful thinking the person you love will never know how you feel. Too bad Lizzie couldnt come back alive lol, Im sure Jack would just love to tell her how he is feeling because you can just imagine how guilty/heartbroken he feels leaving her to die alone never letting her know he loved her. Again great story, lemme know if you write any sequels. You are a spectacular writer!
    chelsea xxxx
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  • From ANON - lauren on February 24, 2007
    I fucking LOVED this story!
    From the middle on I was cursing the story and its characters, hating what they were going through yet I couldn't pulled my eyes away! I hated it for making me cry! *yes I did cry*
    Its so incredibly well written.
    I'm so grateful that ur bringing liz back, that last paragraph you tell us brought me from tears to excitment. I cannot wait for the sequel.
    You should be proud of your story.

    Looking forward to the sequel,
    Lauren
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  • From ANON - freelke on February 21, 2007
    I hope you write a sequel to this story, there would be many great storylines :)
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  • From tinamonic on February 21, 2007
    I absolutely love this fic! You have captured Jack and Elizabeth's essence down to a tee! I cannot wait to read on to the next chapter! Great Job! I will DEFINITELY read your upcoming POTC fics and also the other one you wrote!
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  • From ANON - issoria on February 21, 2007
    Amazing. Beautifully written and just amazing. I can't wait for the sequel.
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  • From ANON - femaria on February 19, 2007
    I have to say that I have never once cried while reading fanfiction until today. And I bawled.... that was wonderful and I hope there is more where it came from.
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  • From ANON - Lily on January 28, 2007
    I loved this story, absolutely loved it. I thought you caught Jack perfectly, and I can't wait till you add more to your other story so I can start reading it without writhing in my seat for the next chapter. You did a fantastic job all around.
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  • From vexesALLmen on January 17, 2007
    Nicely done, and IMO a believable scenario. All the characters were nicely rendered, and the emotions were handled with in a restrained and deft manner. Most enjoyable!!

    vexesALLmen
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  • From ANON - Kris on January 10, 2007
    I would like to say that this has been the best PotC story I have ever, ever, ever read and I believe will ever read. Everything was spot on and I found myself so attached to this and so... God, I don't even have the words to say. Everything was perfect. Jack was Jack, Elizabeth was Elizabeth. Everything... perfect. I rarely ever reviw for a story, seeing as most of the time it has no point since its impossible to get another chapter or sequel out of the writter but when I finished reading this... I had to! This story is so amazing, so brilliatly written. Its perfect. Everything about it is absolutely perfect. Nothing I can see be changed, nothing I would want to change. Perfect. So wonderfully perfect. However, I have to admit I'm slightly uneased about reading this because I now know that no matter what J/E story I read it will never compare to this masterpiece. Quite sad now, no? Unable to thouroughly enjoy other stories now. Ah, but it is worth it. I don't care anymore. This story is 100% worth it.

    I know its silly for me to continue but I am so... moved my the exilency of this story that I have to continue. I have to keep pouring out praise until the feelig of awe and amazement finally leaves the place it has occupied in my chest. Amazing. Again, I must say: amazing. Everything was perfect. Everything.

    Thank you so much. Thank you so much for writting this so that I can enjoy it. Please, if you can, I beg you to write a sequel. But alas, this works well as a standalone also, does it not? Complete in a way and it keeps you wishing, guessing, and hoping? I love the angst. I love the pain. It sounded so real. I could see all this happening. It is so real.

    But, if there is a possability, I again ask for you to write it. I thank you so much again.
    This story has to be the best thing I have ever read...
    Thank you.
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  • From ANON - RussianRouletteKiss on December 28, 2006
    Absolutely fantastic. There is no other way to describe it. Both Jack and Elizabeth were kept in character the whole story (which is a rather amazing feat) and the fact that you were able to build a believable plot line and develop realistic characters in such a short story really shows how well a writer you really are. I also agree that Jack wouldn't just curl up and die. No, Jack would most definitely sail on. I'm very impressed and I'll be crossing my figners for more stories from you.
    ~

    Russian Roulette Kiss

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  • From ANON - jj on December 27, 2006
    wow. extraordinarily beautiful! a real tear jerker, but amazing all the same!
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  • From ANON - Shad on December 25, 2006
    What was awesome, was that at the end, "He's a Pirate" started playing in my head on cue.

    Nicely done. Sequel?
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