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Reviews for Deliverance

By : Bluemidget57
  • From ANON - Anni on January 04, 2007
    I am enjoying this fic. A real story! Good Barbossa characterization. Looking forward to Jack and Elizabeth's 'reunion'. Pls. keep writing!
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  • From ANON - soph on January 01, 2007
    Loved it once again! reallly excited about the next chapter!! good job. update soon xxx
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 30, 2006
    oh my goodness. Please update soon! This fic is great :)
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  • From ANON - howlongmustiwait on December 29, 2006
    Accccccccckkkkkkkkkkkk! You can't stop there - This is TORTURE! Please update w/more .... quickly......PLEASE! I'm really loving your story and can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Jo on December 29, 2006
    Yay! Finally! I'm in love with this story, you should know.
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  • From ANON - kat on December 17, 2006
    OOOHHH!! please update! i can't wait! your soooo evil to end it there! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Liz on December 10, 2006
    The biggest pet peeve I have about Jack/Elizabeth fan fiction is this: Everyone always tries to make it out to seem like Elizabeth isn't attracted to Will, Will doesn't turn her on the way Jack does, she's always wanted Jack, she's never really loved Will more than a friend, etc. etc. blah blah blah blah. This is a lazy plot device in my opinion. Obviously Elizabeth loves Will very much in the movies and wanted to marry him. She may have had feelings toward Jack, but let's be honest with ourselves... it was never love. Possibly at the end of DMC she realized she felt something more than just lust for him, but that's all. When writers try to down play the feelings Elizabeth and Will have for each other, it makes the story lose it's credibility. I'd much rather read a story where Elizabeth is torn between her two loves, rather than looking at Jack as so much better than Will and thinking that she has really loved him all along. Why should the decision be that easy for her? Will is a good man who loves her very much and should stop being portrayed in fan fiction as lame and a poor stand in for Jack. I'm not saying you are doing that here, but I certainly see that you are making it seem as though Elizabeth's feelings for Jack have completely replaced her feelings for Will. I wish that people could be more original than that.



    Now, please do not look at this as a flame. For the most part I have enjoyed this story very much. I think you are a good writer (though this latest chapter seemed a bit superfluous as most of us have already seen the movie and didn't need to rehashing of the kiss scene), and have thus far managed to make the story interesting. I am just not one of those people who are in favor of mindless gushing and praise. Please continue this story, but try a little harder not to fall in to the same pattern most of the rest of the stories here have fallen in to. I know it's easy to make people hate Will or see him as inferior to Jack so that Jack and Elizabeth can be together, but it's really just poor story telling. Other than that, I do think you are doing a wonderful job on this story, and I hope to see more from you very soon.



    Liz
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  • From ANON - Jo on December 09, 2006
    Nope, we don't care about editing. Just post it! lol

    Need. More. Now.

    Pleeeaaassse!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2006
    LOVE THIS. Can't wait to read more
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  • From ANON - soph on December 09, 2006
    oh god wow. you truly are AMAZING. your writing has some kind of poetic flow to it, so emotional and beautiful. I am always at awe with your work, oh please if you have more chapters stored for us please pleasssse don't keep us waiting for that long? I love this story. and what is the website for that livejournel thing? update soon...or il die...
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  • From ANON - howlongmustiwait on December 09, 2006
    Oh boy I can't wait to read all 19,000 words! This is such a wonderful story - I'll be waiting impatiently for you to update!
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  • From ANON - mapsan on November 28, 2006
    Thank you - this is one of the best follow-ups to DMC that I have read. I love how you are weaving together everything and everyone. I love it and anxiously await your next chapter.
    I know you are going to have to handle the Will and Liz situation -- I hope you will not make Will a total wimp (I know what Jack calls him, but really!). He is a strong man with strong convictions who would not want someone who doesn't want him. That said, I am definitely a Jack/Elizabeth fan.
    thanks again and congratulations on a very entertaining, well-written tale.
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  • From ANON - shel on November 25, 2006
    oooo more krakens!
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  • From ANON - anasazi on November 25, 2006
    Must. Have. More.
    Soon.
    Please?
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  • From ANON - howlongmustiwait on November 25, 2006
    He admitted he loves her! I can't wait to see what happens when they find him. Hurry, hurry, hurry-PLEASE!
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