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Reviews for Deliverance

By : Bluemidget57
  • From MoeSparrow on January 28, 2007
    I love the idea of Calypso being Tia's sister instead of Tia herself. That would make so much more sense, to me at least, when remembering how proud Tia seemed to be when telling the story of Jones and how his lady love had jilted him, like she's proud of her sister for breaking his heart or something. Don't know how to explain it, but I like it nonetheless.

    This is a really great story. I really like the storyline and can't wait to see where you take it next!

    Btw, I was the 'Jo' who was commenting. Since AFF made everyone actually register to log in and review, Moe Sparrow's what I came up with (Jo was too short). Just wanted you to know 'Jo' didn't disappear on ya. :)
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  • From man on January 27, 2007
    by the way, im "soph" who got an account. i think adultfanfiction has changed the rules. your not allowed to review stories now if you don't have an account! xxx
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  • From man on January 27, 2007
    wow! excellent chapter!! its such an interesting plot! and i hope jack is maybe just abit angry with elizabeth...because i quite like agnsty stuff...hehehe but i still want it to be a J/E ending!! i just like the bittersweet love between them! another beautifully written chapter! well done! and please update soon!!! xxx
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 21, 2007
    Come on!!! what are you waiting for!!! UPDATE!!! and yes polls say they WILL meet next chapter, they have to! be nice! (can you tell i like your story? a lot? please update soon!)
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  • From Femmevixen13 on January 21, 2007
    Great new chapter! Very interesting and entertaining descriptions of the ritual! And yet again an excellent cliffhanger. Please do provide the next chapter soon, I love this story so much!
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  • From missbliss on January 20, 2007
    Excellent story. You're a fantastic writer. ;)
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  • From heartJD on January 20, 2007
    ooooh I can't wait to read more! I really love your story.
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  • From MoeSparrow on January 20, 2007
    Oh wow, this story is SOOO good! You capture their voices SO well, and you're story is so original, yet believable in this universe. I can't wait to see more of this SOON!
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  • From Femmevixen13 on January 19, 2007
    I am absolutely stunned by this fan fiction. It is written impressively well, and in such a degree that it sounds like the perfect turn of plot for AWE. Please tell me that you are actually one of the potc writers! This story is glorious. I must know what happens. PLEASE post more of it! I'm at the edge of my seat!
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  • From ANON - Kat on January 14, 2007
    ooooooh i likie! may the higher powers make the rest of this chappy suddenly appear! lol
    Captain Jack Sparrow!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY
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  • From ANON - Faithful Reader on January 08, 2007
    I hope the reunion will be soon.

    Loving this! :)
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  • From ANON - howlongmustiwait on January 08, 2007
    All right. Getting ready for the next chapter - Can't wait!
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  • From ANON - soph on January 08, 2007
    yay! another chapter! and it didn't let me down!!! loved jacks encounter with his dad again. hehehe update soon xxx
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  • From ANON - bonnie on January 08, 2007
    this story is great, please continue sooooon!!!!
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  • From ANON - jen on January 05, 2007
    update update update!! oh god you are too good!!! Excellent job
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