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Reviews for Deliverance

By : Bluemidget57
  • From Femmevixen13 on March 05, 2007
    Great new chapter (when are they not great?). I like that you provided a back story to the development of Will's feelings for Elizabeth. And, Barbossa..well.. he shall prove to be quite an annoyance for J/E aye? Ah, but the conflict is certainly necessary. I also love that you had Barbossa realize the symbolism of Jack saving Elizabeth by shooting him with his last bullet, this is indeed a key Sparrabeth moment. Last of all, the scene where Liz's hand becomes entwined with Jack's.. very touching and beautiful. Once again I must reiterate just how amazing this story is. I cannot wait for the next chapter, a J/E reunion hopefully!
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  • From ANON - JEmagic on March 05, 2007
    No we havent all gone away and logging in only takes a few seconds, really love this story please update soon, am I right in thinking that Jacks sudden weekness was directly linked to Lizzy waking up and that we are going to see that only one of them can be awake at a time, proberly some thing to do with the spell or the twin tattoos, or are you just being sneeky and keeping the suspenss going knowing all your readers are dying for the momment when they finally meet properly, either way I love it, keep it comeing.
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  • From SassySparrow on March 05, 2007
    I AM still reading this!!!! And I want a reunion - now! If that wasn't going to happen, I need my rum.......... off searching for the last bottle.....
    Take care,
    ~Saskia~
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 25, 2007
    ACtually, I'm only partly dissapointed that you postponed the meeting, the story gives you legitimate reason, this chapter was really well written. update soon
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  • From Femmevixen13 on February 21, 2007
    I do admit that I would have loved a reunion this chapter. But I understand how you needed to set it up, so that the plot would move smoothly, which you definitely did do. This only means that the next chapter and their subsequent reunion needs to be extra exciting, of which I have no doubts! It's great to read your writing again, please do update soon! ;D
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  • From ANON - howlongmustiwait on February 21, 2007
    I was so very excited to see that you had updated. Haven't been able to review before now and don't know if it'll let me later. That being said I absolutely adore this story. It's one of the best rescue scenarios I have read hands down! You have done a superb job of keeping the characters true. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful - can't wait to read more!
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  • From heartJD on February 21, 2007
    Brilliant, as usual. Definitely the best post-DMC story.
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  • From SassySparrow on February 21, 2007
    Arrrrrgh..... you hit the point! ;o)
    I was hoping for a reunion....... anyway, it'll come sooner or later (more sooner please?)
    Anyway, it was some kind of fun imagining Will how he moved Lizzie from one place to another.... man, he must feel haunted, does he? LOL
    Excellent chapter and I totally love your story with your outstanding writing style - please keep it up!
    ~Saskia~
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 11, 2007
    This was a nice chapter, well written and with amusing moments (despite all the drama) but I can't say it blew me away completely. I liked will's naive assumptions, particularly when compared to all of Lizzie's previous thoughts, but it's those thoughts that actually bother me. I don't know, i dont think she'd completely bypass will for jack. You say all the time that she is debating herself over them, butwhenever its from her perspective all she thinks about is jack. But, either way, I'm sure this will end up as a great story!!!! UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 09, 2007
    wow wow wow. worth the wait! Though I hope we won't havfe to wait as much next time. LOVE IT!
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  • From ANON - howlongmustiwait on February 08, 2007
    I'm sooooooo very excited you updated! Are they going to be headed back to Tia Dalma's now? I'm quite curious as to what the explanations are going to be. Hope you update again soon. I've been checking periodically to see if you have and when I saw you had today I was practically jumping for joy!
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  • From man on February 08, 2007
    As usual i loved this chapter!!! brilliant!! absolutely can't wait to see how he reacts to elizabeth. wake up godamn you!!! hahaha. You describe Will's thoughts very well, and true to the charachter. Once again well done. Soph xxx
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  • From Femmevixen13 on February 08, 2007
    I LOVE the new chapter. This story is beyond excellent. You have a true talent for writing, especially keeping potc so true to its self.

    I do have to admit that I want to smack Will around a bit though, he's being too possessive! ;D Which is a good dilemma for the storyline!

    Pleeeeease update again soon.
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  • From ANON - Moe_Sparrow on February 08, 2007
    I LOVED this chapter! This story is so good. I know real life takes precedence, as it well should, but I certainly hope you'll update more soon! I am very anxious to see the interactions between our two heroes when they're both finally conscious and alert in the same room!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 30, 2007
    I'm too tired to review this articulately: YOU RULE! update sooN!
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