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Reviews for Deliverance

By : Bluemidget57
  • From ANON - Ladyreader on April 15, 2007
    Terrific, but truly cruel to leave it there! Gah, please update soon!

    I have been reading your journal though and I was pleased to hear your surgery went okay, despite your rough time in the wound healing, I hope you continue to improve.
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  • From ANON - JMaX on April 12, 2007
    Great story, flush with detail. There is a point though where the detail starts to bog down the story...We know Will is jealous and smothering, we know that Elizabeth is repentant and randy, we know that Jack troubled....just get on with the story, no need to continue to describe what you have already written about in much detail previously. Go with something new or move the story along. This is purely constructive criticism...I admire this story very much and will continue to read you following chapters, but I find myself skimming over much of what has been written in the last 5 chapters due to what I describe above.

    Do hope that this continues. Update soon!

    Best,
    JMaX
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  • From Jawala39 on March 30, 2007
    Now that I've finally registered here I can let you know how much I love this story....but the suspense is KILLING me!!!!!
    There is a lot of fanfic out there, and a lot of it makes me go, "HUH???" But yours is one of half a dozen that I have to check for updates every time I log on....

    Please update soon!!!

    BTW - I was thrilled to see you liked my first attempt at fanfic...thanks for reviewing!! It really is the first thing I've written, but I have the feeling it won't be the last.....
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  • From ANON - Alexandra on March 28, 2007
    Words escape me. I feel I cannot possibly convey the enormity of this tale. It is, by far, the best I have ever read. And that isn't an exaggeration. Your penchant for weaving words and fabricating plots is rivaled only by your understanding of this story, and all the characters involved. It was as if I was reading the actual screenplay for the third movie itself. Absolutely breathtaking. In fact, my eyes hurt from skimming through each paragraph, eagerly anticipating twist after turn, too excited to slow down and properly read, positively dancing in my computer chair to discover the answer to that ever-asked question: what happens next? And, I'm still wondering. My imagination is impatient. More, more, more! I demand it!
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  • From UndeadMonkey on March 25, 2007
    Great story! Cant wait to read more!!!
    chelsea x
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 21, 2007
    Agreed, Elisabeth does need to stop daydreaming. Lol. Overall, a good chapter, and I like how oblivous Jack can manage to be while believing he's got it all right. And about hte trailer, I'm actually excited to see the film! But anywho, I'd love to read the continuation on this story too!!! Update soon!

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  • From ANON - Lady Michele on March 21, 2007
    This is wonderful! Love the new chapter! Isn't just like the whelp to try to keep her away from Jack. Anyway. I was thrilled to see your update - Can't wait for the next one. Please hurry! :)
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  • From SassySparrow on March 21, 2007
    Uff..... that was not the reunion I was thinking about...... but what was I thinking? Jack's behavior is just normal, isn't it? They soon should have time to get some talky..... right? ;o)
    Please keep it up!
    Ta,
    ~Saskia~
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  • From ANON - howlongmustiwait on March 20, 2007
    SOOOOOOOOOO excited to see an update! I'm w/Lizzie - when ARE they going to talk? **Whimpers** I hope it's soon! Love seeing Lizzie's thoughts on Jack though! And just what IS Barbossa up to and WHAT is Jack thinking he's up to? Puzzling....
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  • From ANON - heartJD on March 20, 2007
    I sooo thought about the W/E kiss in the trailer when I read that chapter! Totally agree :D
    Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Jamie on March 15, 2007
    This is great! Please continue!
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  • From ANON - Jo on March 15, 2007
    Definitely still reading here. :) Sometimes I have to log in... sometimes I don't. *shrug* But I'm definitely still reading and checking nearly daily for updates to this great story! Keep it up, please! :)
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  • From ANON - pirate lover 16 on March 08, 2007
    this story is so good. omg i cant wait for the next chapter to come up. i will be right here reading it as soon as its posted and i get online next. keep up the good work! im offcially hooked.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 06, 2007
    Hey! I still live and I still review (I log in upon entering the site :P). YOU are an evil evil person, you're outright STALLING! They have to meet already, get it on with! but, I like the interactions between will and elizabeth and I like will's perspective and all in all this was a great chapter (but then again, wehn is it not?) update soon (AND HAVE THEM MEET!)
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  • From ANON - howlongmustiwait on March 05, 2007
    YEAH an update! (strange it didn't ask me to log in....)I can definately hear the But, coming and call me cruel BUT, I can't wait! I'm wondering just what Hector is up to - hopefully Jack will be able to keep an eye on him and boot him off the ship ASAP. The thought of Jack losing the Pearl yet AGAIN just makes my skin crawl. Wonderful story - the best rescue scenario by far!
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