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By : Wickedswanz
  • From anniea on December 19, 2008
    oh you are so evil! i want more!
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  • From ANON - ~xAmbeh on September 03, 2008
    I was lmao @ the last chapter..loved it!
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  • From ANON - Lisa on December 11, 2006
    I'm so glad to see that you updated this fic. I was afraid that you had forgotten about it. I'm also glad that Lizzie ended up with Jack (not that I ever doubted she wouldn't--heehee). My favorite part of this chapter was the "Maybe" conversation between Jack and Lizzie. That was so CUTE. I'm pleased to hear that a sequel is a possibility. I also like how you decided to let Will conspire with James against our hero and heroine. It was a nice touch to have both boys take the heart back to Beckett even if you did use a little poetic license to keep Norrington around long after DMC did. Lastly, thank you again for clarifying that "Izzy" wasn't a typo. Please understand that I wasn't criticizing the use of the pet name; I was just confused about whether or not it was intentional, and you are correct. There are many nicknames for Elizabeth including "Izzy".
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  • From ANON - jill on December 11, 2006
    bugger indeed! naughty, NAUGHTY jack! great fic, i can't wait to read the next. i love the way you mix emotion with perfectly executed smut. ;)
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  • From ANON - emeraldfire on December 07, 2006
    Beautifully done! Very hot!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 30, 2006
    Absolutely awesome! Please update soon. You're a great writer.
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  • From ANON - anasazi on November 29, 2006
    PLEASE update soon! You write sex so damn well. Must. Have. More.......
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  • From ANON - howlongmustiwait on November 21, 2006
    I can't believe you stopped there! You're evil I tell you, just evil!(just teasing) I really love this story - can't wait to read what happens next. Of course, I'm going to have to go back and read the beginning again as to why exactly Norrington is there since he took off w/the heart at the end of DMC - see what you do to me I can't remember anything now! Augh.........
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  • From ANON - Lisa on November 21, 2006
    Hooray!!!! Now, we're getting somewhere. Jack's patience with Lizzie's indecisiveness has worn thin. The best line in the fic so far is Jack's "I cringe when I think of you layin' with that boy". Jack ain't the only one; (By the way, the use of ain't isn't poor grammar. It's just a Southerner being a Southerner--snicker) I too "cringe" reading about her doing that with Will. YUCK!!!! Goody!!!! Even more the better, (couldn't resist using a Jack phrase there. It's bad when a movie character corrupts your grammar--chuckle) Will is starting to figure it out. Of course, it took a push from Norrington. That annoying former Commodore finally did something useful. And best of all, Will saw the proof for himself. I suspect the next chapter will get a little volatile, but Lizzie and Jack will soon end up together for good. And that will warrant the biggest and best cheer of all. I do have one question before I close this review. What's up with the use of "Izzy" in place of Lizzie? Is this Jack's new nickname for her or is it a typo? Please clarify this point in your next author's note. Thank you in advance. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - howlongmustiwait on November 15, 2006
    OMG! More - when will there be more? Had to read it again - I will agree W/E being intimate - EWwwww, well at least now she knows Jack is right (or GOD I hope she does!)
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  • From ANON - Lisa on November 15, 2006
    Yay!!!! You updated. I'm desperately hoping that this is the end of the Will sex scenes. I like how you had Jack waiting shirtless on his bed with his cabin door open to pounce on Lizzie like a tiger. I could so see him doing that. I'm also glad that Lzzie finally got to have a satisfying sexual experience. She knows the difference now, and she had better not go back to Will. I don't think Jack will let her either. She's his now, and I dare say he'll let Will know it...one way or the other. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Cat on November 15, 2006
    that...was hot!
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  • From ANON - TamarDavies on November 14, 2006
    i like this! Please continue!
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  • From ANON - Lisa on November 14, 2006
    I'm with heartjd. Reading Will/Lizzie sex was ICKY!!!! But, I suppose she had to try the "boy" to realize that she wants/needs the "man". I'm glad that there is more story to read which means Lizzie will take Jack up on his offer (Hopefully, in the next chapter...hint hint. PLEASE!!!! I can't take reading any more of Will's sexual fumblings). Anyway, I'm glad that you as a writer see what I'm afraid Disney and the Pirates' writers do not. In fact, I have my doubts whether that bunch will ever see the light and come to their senses about the fact that Will and Lizzie have absolutely NO sexual chemistry. They have a friendship and a childhood infatuation with one another, but they have absolutely NO heat in their scenes together whereas Jack and Lizzie very nearly set the screen on fire. Perhaps, teenage girls see chemistry between Will and Lizzie, but I'm 31 years old, and past that point in my life. And if they end up together when this movie series is all said and done, It will be a CRIME!!!! And, I'll want to shoot something. And it won't be the poor, cute, little, undead monkey either. It'll be the mouse. Hear that Disney. If Jack and Lizzie don't end up together, I'm coming for Mickey. I'm a Georgia country girl too; so, I know how to shoot. Ahem!!!! My rant for the day is over. Back to your regularly scheduled review. Anyway, this is an interesting premise for a fic, and if your other work is any indication, then, this will be another wonderful fic from you. I eagerly await its continuation.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 13, 2006
    JACKS SUCH A TEASE!
    grr.
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