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By : Suryallee7104
  • From ANON - Nick on November 02, 2009
    I just found your story and I'm totally in love with it. I hope you plan to update it. It is so awesome. PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!
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  • From tilekitten34 on July 08, 2009
    AWESOME STORY PLEASE UDPATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN I LOVE THIS STORY AND FOR SOMEONE WHOS SECOND LANGUAGE IS ENGLISH YOU DID A GREAT JOB ON THIS STORY
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  • From ANON - Peya Luna on June 25, 2009
    i´m so glad to see that you´ve dated up!! and i totally LOVE the punishment you´ve cooked up for max - very creative+sinister! that gramps+the older families of the town know about the boys was quite a shock, but on the other hand its only logical, no one is THAT oblivious(except the santa carla cops ;-)...and i think the locals are even a bit glad that the boys take care of the darker elements that come to santa carla, given their feeding habits i would assume that they don´t only pray on runaways but also on dealers+other criminals who wont get missed and hence keep the town safe, at least more safe than the blind+deaf cops LOLOL
    honestly, i can´t wait for your next chapter, the further romantic development between sam+marco and paul+allan, the backstory of alanthir, and what about those other elders and a council you´ve mentioned? i´m dead curious!
    p.S: and maybe, just maybe, you can also find the time to update your original 'meersong'? for i love that one too!!
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  • From ANON - Oriya-Chan on June 25, 2009
    I know this might be a little strange... But I will edit this story for you. I am a native English speaker, but I understand how hard it is to learn a new language and to write properly in it. I think this fic has great promise and I would like to help. I will await your reply.

    Oriya-chan
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  • From ANON - Storm on March 16, 2009
    Great job! I can't wait to read more to this story. I like it and I think you are doing great for English not being your native language. I don't have tons of time but if you need help, let me know. Keep up the good work and Please update soon. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - smashthemirror on March 15, 2009
    Just finished rereading this (I know, it takes me a while...) along with the new parts, and wow...all I can say is wow. Truly, with part nine you're reaching a whole new level of sophistication in this story. I'm really, really digging the different dynamics between the pack members and their relationship with Max and the new presence of Alanthir. And you worked the dogs in beautifully...how great that a little change can topple an empire.

    I'm really getting into your pairings and the relationship/sexual dynamic between the pack members. It's so nice to see a fic where it's not just about the sex, but about the emotions and drive behind everything...and you do it without distorting the characters - a major plus in my book.

    So glad to read the new part, and I hope you'll continue this when you have the time. Take all the time you need - you know I'll keep coming back for more!
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  • From ANON - Peya Luna on February 20, 2009
    Yay!! finally!! do you have any idea how long i was searching for a good, long lb-fic that isn´t abandoned but will be written until finished? ( i SO hate authors who let you hanging with an unfinished story...grr!!) but this....your story is simply awesome! i love the slowly developing romances as well as the thickening trouble, and those flashbacks about how david found his childe or how alan and paul first met gives each character even more depth and makes one really attached to them...*purrs in uttermost delight* honestly, i can´t wait for the next update, and i hope this will indeed become an epic story!
    i´ve got two little questions though: has max turned lucy? and who is maria - its been quite long since i last saw the movie and can´t remember her....and will laddy, once he´s grown up, become dwaynes second mate?
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  • From ANON - smashthemirror on January 21, 2009
    haven't gotten a chance to read the new parts yet - I'll probably read it all from the beginning as a great big treat to myself - but I wanted to let you know how THRILLED I am to have more of this story! I'm so excited to read the new parts! And I hope things are going well too - I almost emailed you to check up on you the other week, but the holidays and work and a tragedy in the family kept my mind focused on other things. At any rate, welcome back and none too soon!
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  • From megara1 on January 11, 2009
    SQUUUUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOUR BACKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!! La Sob!
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  • From ANON - Stephanie on January 04, 2009
    OK, first off, I love your story! I really do. The plot is excellent and you seem to actually pay attention to what you're writing (unlike other authors on here).

    But, you're right, your grammar stinks. I know it's not your fault because you don't have a beta so, because I love this story (and I'm a grammar and spelling freak), I'm offering my services. I usually don't beta but as I said before, I really love this story and I don't want people to snub it because of poor grammar.

    So if you're interested my e-mail is above, if not that's fine too.
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  • From Vyper on November 04, 2008
    This is a great story, I hope you get to writing more of it later. I just found it and I think you are wonderful. You are doing terrific so please keep up the good work.
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  • From lovershatred on July 09, 2008
    i really love it. please write more soon.
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  • From Ardeth99 on October 02, 2007
    Hey I love it!!!!!!! Can you email me the next time a chapter comes out?
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  • From DrusillaDeWynter on June 19, 2007
    Five stars to you. I love your story. Sam/Marko and David/Michael are my favorite pairing. I wish you could update more. If you ever need a beta or something feel free to give me a shout. I'm always willing to help others. Keep up the good work!!
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  • From ANON - solana on January 14, 2007
    Great job this keeps getting better and better please update soon
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