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Reviews for My knight in blood

By : AngelofBlood
  • From Retribution on November 06, 2006
    I really like this story. it has my to favorite things in it. predators and vampires. YEAH!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kehlan on November 03, 2006
    Ok, I really like the story,it has alot of potential. It's good but to be honest, you could make it a lot better by simply checking your spelling and grammar more carefully. For example "Mios mother" should be Mio's mother" with an apostrophe. Also you sometimes use the wrong word - eg in chapter three, "aloud in heaven nor hell" Well "aloud" means noisy - the word you need there is "allowed" which means "permitted" Using the wrong word like that will not be picked up by computer spell checkers but they completely change the meaning of what you want to say.

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  • From ANON - scars lady13 on November 02, 2006
    this is something new, and I like it alot. please write more.
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  • From ANON - Bee on November 02, 2006
    This is super interesting! I can't wait to see where you are taking this story....a half yajuta/human and a vampire? Very unique concept!!
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on November 01, 2006
    HHHMMM, her mystery man returns. I bet her father's new mate had the bad bloods go after her, she sounds like a nasty piece of work, just the kind to do it. Keep going.
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on October 31, 2006
    I hope your going to keep going with this, cause it sounds like it could be very interesting.
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  • From ANON - Kraven Spider on October 31, 2006
    Interesting I would not mind reading more
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