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Reviews for What Would You Do? *1*

By : Pilgrim
  • From Kimmie on February 21, 2007
    I was going to wait till the end of what would you do part 2 to review but i just cant keep it in any longer. This is equal first as my favourite story ever!!! I love the character of Oria. Oh i cant wait to see her in a dress lol gonna be funny. Ok im gonna stop here coz i wanna read part 2. see you there!!! YAY
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  • From ANON - mar1966 on November 22, 2006
    Great action writing! How do you ever figure out who goes where?

    Looking forward to What Would You Do 2!
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  • From ANON - mar1966 on November 21, 2006
    Good speech to the looky-loos who don't review!

    By the way, snuggle time with daddy....awwwww!
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  • From ANON - mar1966 on November 19, 2006
    Why am I the only one reviewing this story?

    266 hits and I'm the only one with an opinion???


    I love that the happy little family is all together now!! Sweet!

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - mar1966 on November 17, 2006
    Hot and smexy!!!!


    This story is going great!!
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  • From ANON - mar1966 on November 13, 2006
    I'm loving these twists!!

    Excellent updates!!

    Glad to hear your horse is better.

    More please, soon!!
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  • From ANON - mar1966 on November 08, 2006
    Ok, ok, I'll let you slide. I know colic in a baby is bad, I can't imagine what it is in a horse!

    Nice work adding Oria to the story. Things will get mucky if Jack's attraction for Elizabeth get's between him and Oria!

    Can't wait to find out!
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  • From ANON - mar1966 on November 07, 2006
    This is POTC verbatim...can we get back to Oria??? PLeassseeee!!!
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  • From ANON - mar1966 on November 06, 2006
    I'm really curious to see how you work Oria into the Curse of The Black Pearl story.

    You've got my rapt attention!

    More please!
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  • From ANON - mar1966 on November 03, 2006
    Poor Jack! How will he ever get that boat from Ana-Maria??

    Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - mar1966 on November 02, 2006
    I see more of the Jack we know and love coming out!!

    This is a great tale, don't stop!
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  • From ANON - mar1966 on November 01, 2006
    Gosh almighty! Give me a chance! Yesterday was Halloween you know, and I've got kids! Busy, busy!

    This part of the story is great! Gives good rounding out to the 1st POTC movie.

    I'm assuming Oria lost her baby? It wasn't crystal clear.

    I'm anxiously awaiting more!
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