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Reviews for The History of Tomorrow

By : vanillalace
  • From ANON - beliefinkakashi on January 07, 2011
    T_T
    That was verra touching! *wipes tears from me eyes*
    I liked all the endings, loved the heart ache, the funny bits, and the happy moments!
    One of the best and most touching story i've read!
    good luck.
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  • From DeathGodDist on July 25, 2007
    A great ending to a great story. Congratulations for making it through to this conclusion. :)

    I can imagine how tough it must be to struggle to find an appropriate closer for a story that has been a big part of your time for a while now. I'm just glad that you were able to settle on something, and even though you may not be too happy with it, there's always edits that can be done in the future if you have brainstorms. :)

    And of course, a major big congrats on getting engaged. I wish you many happy years to come. :)

    Again, great job, and I'll be looking out for updates to 'Ripple'.
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  • From prairiefire on July 25, 2007
    This was just awesome. I don't know how you could have made it better.
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  • From ANON - ashesxx2xxashes on June 03, 2007
    Oooo...*sniffles* LOOK WHAT YOU DID YOU BAD PERSON You made me cry. This was awesome!!! I like the alternate endings but I'd really like to see one with a HAPPY ending...I like the Ugly ending best...the way you closed it with the black warrior taking Aja away to Kella...It was good.

    ashesxx2xxashes
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  • From DeathGodDist on May 31, 2007
    First off, thanks for being one of the only writer's here who are updating frequently. I dunno what happened but it's like everyone plum vanished in the last two weeks or so.

    And of course, another great possible ending for your story. Certainly not as depressing as the last one, but it was still "bad" as intended. :)

    Though actually, I kind of hope you do take as much time as you need with the last ending, since that is going to be the last entry to be written for this story, it seems like it would be quite special. I'll be looking out for it, and of course, your continued brilliance with Ripple. :)
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  • From prairiefire on May 31, 2007
    OK, so this one is a little better than the last. I was still crying, but I think that was what you were going for.

    Please don't take too long with the final chapter. I don't think my poor little heart can take it.
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on May 30, 2007
    AH HA!! I see what you are doing. Very nice. Three possible endings. I like it. I can't wait to see what the 'good' ending is going to be...I do have my thoughts and hopes, but we'll see... =D
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 28, 2007
    NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Aja and Kella broke up! There's no hope left in my soul!!!
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  • From Shalimar on May 27, 2007
    Three possible endings ... do we get to vote?
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  • From DeathGodDist on May 26, 2007
    Well done indeed. You captured the worst possible outcome very well. I suppose my only critique would be that I would have (not saying I can of course :P) written out the final battle of Kella and her thoughts until the end. Though, I suppose that this chapter was mainly to focus on Aja since these events were the consequences of his choices.

    So again, well done. I look forward to the other possible endings.
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  • From prairiefire on May 25, 2007
    Ok, ignore that first line of my last review. I should really read everything in a chapter instead of just skipping down to the body of the story. Silly me assumed since it was "The Good, the Bad, and the Ugly" it would go in that order.

    So, YAY!

    The good is still coming. Yay!! There is hope. I love you Nalani.
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on May 25, 2007
    Why? Why did you have to do that to us? That was horrible. I hurt from that. That was a tear-jerker for sure. Please tell me that is gets better?... Great update. Can't wait for more. =)
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  • From prairiefire on May 25, 2007
    That was the GOOD!!!

    I'm near tears here Nalani. Gods, how are you going to twist my heart next.

    This chapter is so heart breaking, how the Elder doesn't realize until too late, how Aja pines for her the rest of his life. And to loose Naxa too. Heart breaking, heart breaking.


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  • From ANON - Death God Dist on May 04, 2007
    Ah, so after all this time, we are nearing the end of this wonderful tale. Heh, what a change a chapter makes, from being so close to eachother to being so far apart, those pesky Ooman emotions do tend to complicate things eh? In this case unlike 'Alone' I'll have to fault the female more than the male for being so stubborn. Kella should have been more rational, or at least not so hysterical when explaining what she wanted, and then to go and cut off the mark, hmm. I'm getting the feeling her latest idea is drawn from that and her regret, she knows she'll probably die by Elder Rh'ds hand and that's what she wants now, having secured the safety of her children.

    So, three endings huh? I'll be sure looking forward to them, as well as your continued great work with "Ripple" :)

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  • From prairiefire on May 03, 2007
    Hon, we love you and know that life can bite at times. Don't worry about it, your late updates certainly out-paces mine.

    I love this story and I don't want it to be over. But, gods, what is wrong with the males in this section. Kella gives up so much for Aja, and he can't find a way to keep her. Worst, he rubs it in her face that he can have these things. He's got has a lot to do to redeem himself, if he gets the chance.
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