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Reviews for The History of Tomorrow

By : vanillalace
  • From ANON - Li na on October 07, 2006
    OOOOO!!! I love this story, but you do need to get a beta. Other than that, ITS WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 06, 2006
    Eee I already like Aja. =)
    Kella is one kick ass woman. Great chapter, so glad to see you updated.
    Can't wait to see what happens next...
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on October 06, 2006
    HAHAHAHA!!!! That was so funny. I loved it. I want more. Of both fics! Waiting...
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  • From ANON - Narranasa on October 06, 2006
    Great to see that you decided to continue.
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  • From ANON - Sin on October 06, 2006
    I like your story please dont stop i have to find out what happens
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  • From ANON - Prairiefire on October 06, 2006
    So help me if you delete this story. I will find you, and I will suck this story out of your brilliant brain.

    You seem to have a flare for giving your female leads a sadistic edge. Of course, that could just be the influence of the Predator category. Either way, well done.
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on October 06, 2006
    Please don't take this story off. If you don't get other reviews saying "Hey don't delete continue." Write it for yourself to get it out of your head and you can always email it to me and other interested people to read. Please.Please.Please don't delete it. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - conncoll on October 06, 2006
    i really like...its very interesting and excellently written...MOREMOREMORE!!!
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on October 05, 2006
    I would definately like to see more of this. I like the possiblities it has. And I would be very disappointed if you didn't finish "Ripple of Stone". But...that's just my two cents worth. :)
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  • From ANON - Kehlan on October 05, 2006
    I really like this story and very much hope you will continue to write it. I am really looking forward to finding out what happens next. Well done!
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  • From ANON - Narranasa on October 05, 2006
    Nooo, don't stop. :)
    An intriguing start, and I would love to read more.
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 05, 2006
    I love Apocalypse stories, and this definetly had a plot that grabbed my eye instantly, I just had to read it to see if it was what it sounded like.

    It was. Very intriguing. You've found a very original plotline, and I think Kella is a strong character.
    I definetly have high hopes for your story, and I hope you stick with this story. No I demand you stick with it or else I'll have to steal this plot myself. It's too good. =P Congrats.

    Usually new stories on here aren't that good, and when I go to the Predator section my favourite stories are rarely updated. I've added your story to my list of favourites. :)
    Don't keep me waiting please!

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  • From ANON - Bee on October 05, 2006
    Oh very interesting Nalani! I wonder if the elder marked Kella's face with his clan's symbol meaning she belongs to his clan? Maybe he marked her for one of his children? Your first chapter was excellent and I look forward to more!
    Bee
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on October 04, 2006
    This is really good. You should continue at your own pace, but please continue with it. I need to know if the high Elder is going to find her again.
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