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Reviews for The History of Tomorrow

By : vanillalace
  • From ANON - Narranasa on October 21, 2006
    Why do you even ask :) Loved it of course.
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 20, 2006
    *mouth is open*
    kella's not the only one who's aroused by aja.
    heh heh. man. man man man. awesome chapter.
    i just have one thing to say:
    i enjoy sex scenes, but they are even better when they don't happen too soon. so don't rush into it. but still...i love the sexy tension between aja and kella. hopefully it won't be a one night stand lol.
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  • From Retribution on October 19, 2006
    this is all to real. keep going i want to read more
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  • From ANON - Muse of Scrolls on October 16, 2006
    Such an intense and amazing story. I do love the way you develop your characters, and A'ja and Kella are so meant for each other. Just...whoa. I can't even really put it into words. Please keep working on the story. I do want to read more.
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  • From ANON - aquamum on October 14, 2006
    Nalani,

    Yet another fab story...

    Love the characters and your writing - looking forward to them hooking up!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Bee on October 13, 2006
    wow this is really really good...quick question though, does Aja keep denying that anything can happen between him and Kella because there is a rule where Yajutas cannot mate with oomans or is it him stopping himself because he has hated oomans since he was young? That will be interesting to find out. His father seems to really like Kella so it seems like he would approve? I will just have to wait and see huh?
    Fabulous chapter! I can't wait for more Aja and Kella!!
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on October 11, 2006
    Another great chapter. I think it's safe to say you've got us hooked. I love the name Bthm - Bath Him, LOL. If he needs it I will offer to bath him.

    You must keep going please. This story is great.
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on October 11, 2006
    I fricking LOVE your stories!!! I can't tell you how much! I can't wait for the next updates!!! :)
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  • From ANON - angelpred on October 11, 2006
    Wow,wow wow...this story is always more beautiful!!!!!!
    Fantastic the scene in to the bedroom....and Aja is cool...!!
    Oh I can't wait to see what happens next.
    Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 11, 2006
    You...you evil woman. =D

    I don't know why I'm smiling but how could you!
    I was getting ready to go to bed, but decided to check and see if anyone updated...and wow. This was an amazing chapter. You've got skill. And you've got me hooked. I can't wait till you update again...cuz this was a real cliffie. grrr. Aja is hot. Wouldn't mind trading places with Kella.
    -Cara
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  • From ANON - Prairiefire on October 11, 2006
    Well, you can breathe easier. To come and suck your brain I would need to find someone like a Betazoid or someone telepathic, then actually find you, and well, I'm just too lazy for that.

    Awesome job on the chapter. Aja seems cool, the Elder is too.

    Yeah, the White Dragon's dead.

    I feel like a hypocrite asking you to update fast, but do it anyway ok?
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  • From ANON - Kehlan on October 11, 2006
    I've been reading your story and am really enjoying it. Please continue.

    You asked about uploading. Well, the way I do it is to write the chapter on Word and the copy it and paste it into the text box. You just highlight the text you want to copy, hit Crtrl C and then Ctrl V to paste it.

    hope that helps

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  • From ANON - Bee on October 08, 2006
    Oh you have to continue this story!! Especially now, it's getting to the good part, they know who she is now!! Oh I can't wait to see what happens next. I love that you made her so strong but still feminine and sweet! She will defintely be worthy for Ajas!!!

    Please post soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Tasha on October 08, 2006
    Please please please continue i think i like this even more than your other story, which i love too by the way!
    Boy do i hope you update this again soon, it rocks!!!
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  • From ANON - angelpred on October 07, 2006
    wow,this fic is very fantastic....!!Kella is a character much interesting.
    The alternative story of our planet is fantastic.
    Please continue this fic!!!
    Please please......update soon..!!!!!!!!
    Excuse me for my english,but i'm italian.....and i don't write very well.. :-)

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