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Reviews for The History of Tomorrow

By : vanillalace
  • From ANON - ..... on January 29, 2007
    WOOT for the new chappte!! I loved it! And i also personaly do not like the govenor guy...he gets on my nerves...-___-
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  • From Kehlan on January 29, 2007
    Wow there's a thought. I wonder how the Elders would react when told they were having "Death by chocolate" Would they appreciate the joke? and, yes, the parsley icident was hysterical.

    I really loved the sex scenes between Aja and Kella, it was incredibly hot but also tender and romantic.

    Please have mercy on your readers and GIVE US MORE!!!!!!!

    Kehlan
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 28, 2007
    I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!
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  • From prairiefire on January 28, 2007
    Nalani, do you know what kind of story this is?

    This is the kind of story that keeps PF up until 3AM reading even though she KNOWS she has a truck to unload at 730AM. Kudos. I got the alert and I couldn't just wait until after work today to read it so I had to stay up.

    I must say I love the parsley escapade. Mmmm, chocolate. You know, mint chocolate chip ice cream is the second best chocolate. It follows closely behind death by chocolate ice cream. Now that would be an interesting concept to introduce to our hunters. Death by Chocolate.
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  • From ANON - Muse of Scrolls on January 07, 2007
    Such a very awesome story, Nalani. The pace of the story is amazing, and it's enough to leave me wanting more. I have one thing to say about Aja and Kella: it's about DAMN time. ;) I will enjoy reading more later on.
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  • From ANON - Death God Dist on December 30, 2006
    So, they finally did the deed eh? They better watch out if that new mark on Kella doesn't give them away to everyone. :o

    Heh, I wonder what was in those photos that forced Harper to step down as governor? Must have been something really embarrasing to have to grovel to Kella like that. :)

    Great chapter as always, keep it up, even if people aren't reviewing (knuckleheads!) :)
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  • From ANON - Muse of Scrolls on December 05, 2006
    Nalani, I don't know how you manage to do it. You've taken UST to a completely different level...but it's understandable. I love the whole action being drawn out, and, whoa, Aja just needs to give ALL of we girls a show, ne? ;) Really loving the story, and looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on December 05, 2006
    Back again.

    I ment to say sprung not strung, although the Elder may string Aja up by his .... well you get my drift, when he catches him and Kella together.
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on December 05, 2006
    I'm with Death God Dist.

    Man can they ever get a break. Anyone would think they're a married couple with half-a-dozen kids and working 5 jobs between them.

    And I can so see them being strung big time.

    Another great chapter young lady.

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  • From ANON - Death God Dist on December 05, 2006
    Phew, is it hot in here or is it just me? :)

    Talk about spicing up the story. Though they can't seem to get anywhere without being interrupted. Oh well, Kella finally has Aja in her bed now, so who knows what may happen? They just better watch out in case the Elder decides to pay an early morning house call.

    Wonderful writing as always, I continue to look forward to what comes next.
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  • From ANON - Scarlett on November 21, 2006
    I love this story so far. It has such a good plot. The romance to it is astounding sence you didnt have your characters F**king in the first scene. So i applaud you. I also found it so funny twoard the end and the thing with the kiwwis was priceless. Well heres to your story. I hope its nice and long.
    Wolfthesnake@aol.com
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  • From ANON - Death God Dist on November 20, 2006
    What can I say? I was greatly anticipating this chapter, and you delivered in spades. Simply amazing.

    First off, props again to your ability to allow the reader to visualize the world you've created. All the subtle details and pieces placed into the story do wonders to make the world come alive (even the most seemingly trifle thing like the "birth control" ointment Kella uses adds a lot to the story - showing the reader just how she's been able to not have kids considering her *cough* promiscuity *cough* ;). And of course, your writing style just oozes personality, and each character definitely has their own. I'm quite impressed with Kella, having read over the previous chapters again as well as this current one to see how important she is to all those around her. She really does have a heavy burden placed on her.

    Hah, makes sense that Adam turned out to be a politician, though I still have a hard time imagining them in loin cloths. I don't think they fit Ooman's well (except the females of course :)), that’s just me though. Though I suppose the female readership here probably wouldn't mind some Ooman males in loin cloths :)
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  • From ANON - Muse of Scrolls on November 20, 2006
    Once again, Nalani-sama, you have done it. It has been a wonderful chapter filled with more about Kella and Aja and even additional characters. I loved the part involving Mercedes conversation while the Yautja were visiting Kella. It must be quite a feat for Kella to contain her excitement (or anxiety?) at having so many Yautja visit her. I find that a most interesting part in each of the chapters where Elder Rhd (and others) visit her. Also, I really love what you are doing with Kella and Aja's relationship...even if it's making the rest of us wait right along with them. I enjoyed it greatly, and look forward to more. Thank you for sharing your story. ^_^
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on November 19, 2006
    I loved it. Now you'll have to have a scene for me where Mercedes does bath him. Just kidding. HHHMMMMMM could be interesting though.

    I think old Elder Rhd might have a thang for Kella too, or am I wrong. I shall just have to wait and see.
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  • From ANON - Chancelor22 on November 19, 2006
    Happy, happy. Joy, joy! I love your updates. It's like reading a novel. You should get them published! I would buy the book(s). Can't wait till next time. =D
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