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Reviews for The History of Tomorrow

By : vanillalace
  • From ANON - chancelor22 on May 01, 2007
    OOOO, sooo saaad! That is horrible! I can only hope that everything will work out in the end. Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From JulieL on May 01, 2007
    Oh Man. This is gripping. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Post when life lets you Nalani I will be waiting patiently.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 30, 2007
    Please, please, PLEASE tell me there will a sequal! Kayla and Aja are so cute together. I need more!
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  • From MuseofScrolls on March 26, 2007
    I really hope Aja returns to Kella. They've been through too much not to be together. ^_^ I'll just bet that Elder Rhd has an idea of what's going on. You don't get to be and Elder and not learn a thing or two. Really wonderful update, Nalani. ^_^
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on March 25, 2007
    I hope Aja returns to Kella. I still reackon Elder Rhd knows something. He didn't come down in the last meteor shower. lol It will be interesting to see.
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on March 25, 2007
    I forgive you for being late. But I would like an update on 'Ripple' please! As for History...I almost cried when Aja saw the snow. That was very well written. The emotions were portrayed very clearly. I can't wait for the next update. =)
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  • From prairiefire on March 24, 2007
    Gotta love that coin toss. I've done it a couple of times.

    Please, please let Aja return. Please.
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  • From DeathGodDist on March 03, 2007
    Ah, another nice addition to this great story. This should be quite a new and interesting dynamic you're introducing here with the wannabe caretakers, could prove for some great experiences down the road. As always, I'll be looking forward to more for this story, as well as for whenever you'll get back to Ripple as well.

    Cheers
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on February 24, 2007
    Yay. that was great. I love the puppy interaction. I have never thought about that before. I can't wait for the next update. =)

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  • From MuseofScrolls on February 22, 2007
    Excellent chapter. I'm delighted to actually see how Aja is incorporated in Kella's daily routine. Oh, and they now have a puppy...too cute! Somehow, I wasn't surprised that Naxa gets along so well with Aja. ^_^ And so the plot thickens (or at least reveals itself more) towards the end of the chapter. Looking forward to more when you are able, Nalani!

    Don't worry; just update when you can. We'll still be here and ready for more. ^_^
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on February 22, 2007
    LOL. I could just see the disappointment on Aja's face when Kella told him that dinosaurs don't exist anymore. One big preddy pout.

    I love the Big Bad Warrior and the Cute Little Puppy scenes.

    Can't help but think that Elder Rhd knows something though. I reackon big daddy knows more about their relationship than what they think he does. After all, he didn't exactly come down in the last shower.

    Great Chapter
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  • From prairiefire on February 22, 2007
    Well, its about time.

    Nah, just kidding. I was actually "The House" to be updated first, though.

    Your characters just make me smile. They would have made me laugh, but thankfully I was able to hold it in. Otherwise, there would have been diet coke all over my computer screen.

    The idea of training more Caretakers is probably one of those obvious things that need to be done, but nobody thinks of it.

    As far as Naxa, the white Tibetan Mastiff, I don't know. Right now there is no gene for a solid white TM. Even white markings are discouraged. The Kennel Club breed standard only allows for a white star on the chest and minimal white on the toes. Unless, of course, during the war some of the Great White Livestock Guards (Great Pyrs, Kuvasok, Maremma etc) slipped into the gene pool undocumented.
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  • From ANON - BAXTER on February 08, 2007
    HEY WERENT YOU ONE OF THE MAIN PEOPLE BITCHING THAT THER WAS NO WAY TO STOP ANONYMOUS REIVERWS? AND YET YOU KNOWINGLY TOOK OFF YOUR ‘U MUST BE LOGGED IN’ THING? STUPID FAGGOT.
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  • From ANON - Death God Dist on January 29, 2007
    Ah, quite a long chapter, but still very well done indeed. I always love how believable your writing style makes your story, and it definitely holds true with this chapter and the detail put into it. I won't complain if it takes longer than usual to bring out chapters such as this, because it is really worth the wait. :)
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  • From MuseofScrolls on January 29, 2007
    Ooooh...really loved the first part. But, wow, the banquet has turned out to be quite interesting. Poor little Mike, only trying to do his job, and he gets caught. Way to save the day, Kella! Looking forward to more when you get the chance, Nalani. ^_^
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