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Reviews for La Principessa

By : Morosetintedglasses
  • From on December 18, 2007
    I loved the description of the sex but since you asked...it's a personal thing of mine, I am not one who loves the "it was all a dream" ending to climactic sex scenes. It reminds me of soap operas that make you think the couple finally got together and it turns out it was all a fantasy. They do that for months and then by the time the couple really does it most of the excitement is gone.

    My unbidden advice is to make the teaser dreams short, and make the long dreams obviously dreams. And give us the really good sex...which you write very well... when it's really supposed to be happening.

    Final commment...I loved the humor and realism of "Grog" but I figured you for a Jack-hater when I read it. I decided to give you another chance anyway and I'm very pleased to see you're not a Jack-hater after all. ;)

    Rosa Seravo, who gets mad at Jack a lot but rather wuvs him. :)
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  • From FreeSpiritedOne on September 17, 2007
    Wow, you did a fantastic job! A few typos that mared the flow of your prose, but so what? It was wonderful. Also I must thank you for having bothered with some research (16, 17, & 18th century history are interests of mine) and for using such a wide range of language. I also believe I detect a scietist in there somewhere. I'm pre-med and I'm wondering if you aren't too.

    Anyhoo, I really enjoyed it and find myself disappointed because I have now read all your stories and must patiently wait for more.

    Cheers, Free
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 17, 2006
    Aw. I'm loving this fic. Keep up the great work. :)
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  • From ANON - zariva on September 27, 2006
    I see you posted the chapters in a different order here than you did at Fanfiction.net
    Interesting. :)

    Well, I'm still exited to read more of your wirting, especially since you're writing one of the few stories out there that focus on Beckett.
    So, keep up the good work, please! ;)

    Rive
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  • From JacksMermaid on September 25, 2006
    Holy Christ, this is intense. A car wreck that one can't look from, the edge of the falls one can't help but peer over. I'm almost afraid to say I look forward to more...
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  • From ANON - sophia on September 20, 2006
    WOW. just wow. that was absolutely *amazing* you capture each and every individual so well!! Beautifully written, with a very wide range of vocab. Very impressive. It's very rare to come across a piece so excellently written like this, it certainly was very interesting to read. I love dark fics...and this was really dark...i just loved it!!! I'm suprized you havn't got any reviews yet...but I'm your first reviewer! yay! I'm still so curious about what has happened to Will and Jack. Your plotline so far is very promisisng....i just can't stop praising you. I guess you must be a very professional writer seriously. It felt like I was in their head.....listining to their thoughts. Well done! please continue, really excited for more chapters. You are very talented!
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