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Reviews for The Ripple of a Stone

By : vanillalace
  • From ANON - wilcat on October 01, 2006
    hi just started reading predator stories and yours is one of the best i have read so far the only thing that is bothering me is that the more we get to know nala the more un human and fucked up she seems to be i am not saying that she should be cuddeling a bunny or anything but cutting someone into pieces and takng pleasure from it no matter the reason makes her into nothing more than a pshyco
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  • From ANON - Prairiefire on October 01, 2006
    Oh, that was too good. Playing with his mandible, hehe. What next, tugging on his hair?

    Kombistick through the balls (well, damn close), the look on his face must have been priceless. And leaving him stuck to the wall was just the cherry on top.

    Now we want an update. Where is part two? You can't leave us like this for long. Come on, update. Update. UPDATE!!!
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  • From karmaxp on September 30, 2006
    When I started this no one had posted anything and I see that I have posted over you and I am sorry. I am telling you to go ahead and repost if you want to I do not care. Lorna
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  • From ANON - Bex on September 26, 2006
    This is brillaint. One of the best Predator stories I have ever read. Please post again soon!
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on September 24, 2006
    Nah! Forget about it! I like the story the way it is. I don't think you should change the whole fic just for that one little inconsistancy. Just change the part about the translator only being one way. Other wise, you'd have to go back and rewrite...what, like the last three chapters?! That's too much work. And, like I said, I like it the way it is. I can't wait for more. I really like this fic. It took me like 4 days of reading to get caught up. It was like reading a book. I can I have some more please?! :)
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  • From ANON - Prairiefire on September 24, 2006
    Awesome chapter.

    I just have to say, when you introduced the "human balls" My first thought was Prairie Oysters (I know Caz knows what I am talking about). Then I doubled over laughing.
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  • From ANON - caz on September 24, 2006
    don't worry, it happens. I do it to, forget that i wrote something one way and bugger it up later. the crappy thing is it's hard to fix. hmmm. maybe she got such a jolt to the head she now doesn't understand em? *shrug*

    they eat human? blegh... we're so tiny and meatless! even sharks don't like us, we don't have enough meat to keep them going, so they spit us out. LOL. human balls. hahahahha...
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  • From ANON - Swift Hunter on September 22, 2006
    Don't worry yourself about getting booted off ff, us loyal fans (stalkers) will stick with you. The story is still really great and I can't wait for more.
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  • From Edison on September 21, 2006
    I started reading this last night but I got sleepy, NOT FROM YOUR STORY I had a deadline at work, I think this is great and I am glad we are attracting all the great writers. Welcome to here :) and on to the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Prairiefire on September 20, 2006
    Totally good chapter. Don't take too long with the update. We need to know how this fight ends. I think D's gonna have his butt handed to him with a good dose of humility.
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  • From Mitresslove on September 20, 2006
    We remember reading this on FF and we thought it was great and it will be even BETTER now. We are happy another has joined the ranks and want to welcome you.
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  • From ANON - papaya4 on September 19, 2006
    please continue please put more updates in the story as soon as possible I beg you pretty please with whipped cream and a cherry on top the story is wonderful and awesome and super too.
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  • From ANON - Prairiefire on September 18, 2006
    Welcome to the adult side. Now we don't have to worry about the story being pulled for being a little too risque.
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  • From ANON - circle of addictions on September 17, 2006
    Well we are our worst critique, because your first chapter was great! I love your detail. Ok, going to go read more now!
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