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Reviews for The Ripple of a Stone

By : vanillalace
  • From ANON - raizer on November 11, 2006
    this is an awesome story so far!!!!!!! Please do keep going. Wonderful description!! I loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter. It this were a Predator book I would buy it! And it totally could be!
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  • From ANON - Death God Dist on November 08, 2006
    I simply wanted to echo my thoughts on this story which are pretty much identical to the ones I gave for "History"

    Brilliance! :)

    You've built up a solid array of characters each with their own identifying personalities and features. Nala is as strong a protagonist as Kella and her comrades are just as believable. I must say, I'm itching to see just who Nala will "hook up" with first. As you've proven with your other story, you can be quite unpredictable in that regard, though this time; there'll be no lousy 'Ooman' to ruin things. :D

    Again, superb job, and I can't wait to read future installments.
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  • From ANON - Prairiefire on October 30, 2006
    Well, I guess i should dust off the keyboard and get to date on reviews huh?

    The last two chapters have been exceptional. Nala and D making up was perfect and the scavenger hunt was a unique idea.

    That piece of c'jit Yautja with a rear for a mouth got what was coming to him. I don't think you could expect any different from any female, human or yautja.

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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on October 30, 2006
    Yay! I love this fic. I want it to go on forever as well. I can't wait to see what happens next. I just love the way you write. :)
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 30, 2006
    Hurray for Nala going to go on her first hunt. I hope it will be successfull.
    I love the unique customs and information you slip in about the yautja. Some people don't really elaborate on their food, or their anatomy and such. It gives the story more originality.
    I also enjoyed the dream scenes. Finally we get to learn more about Nala's past.
    Can't wait to see what transpires between Nala and Dhm'ni next time in the... bedroom. Lol.
    So many refreshing characters. Jabot got what he deserved, Nala told him not to say any more but he just had to open his big mouth. What an ass. He didn't even know her.
    And what will happen when she's introduced to the rest of the clan? Hmmmm.
    Some ass kicking will be due I'm sure. :p
    "You act like you never seen an Ooman befo'"
    lol. Happy Hallowe'en and Samhain. =)
    I'll email you about the uh.. yautja wang. ;)
    Is it hot in here or is it just me? Phewww.
    -Cara
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  • From ANON - Kehlan on October 30, 2006
    I am really enjoying this story and look forward to the next installments. I only have one very minor quibble... the word "venerable" means honoured and respected. the word you need is "vulnerable".
    I hope you will keep writing as I really do like your stories.

    Kehlan
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  • From ANON - adam on October 27, 2006
    Cant wait to see the next chapter the story realy kept me reading from early in the morning to 10:32 would have done more but no more chapters well keep up the good work.

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  • From ANON - angelpred on October 23, 2006
    Wow...this story is very beautiful!!!!!!Fantastic the scene in the baths....
    I love Dhm'Ni...is very awesome!!!!!
    You are very good to write!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Please update soon!!!!
    Oh I can't wait to see what happens next.!!!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - aquamum on October 23, 2006
    Oh I forgot - more tongue please - god I'm naughty.
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  • From ANON - aqaumum on October 23, 2006
    Hmmm.... a whole bath full of Yautja.....- LOL
    Why does Nanali get to have all the fun...I'm soooo jealous. hee hee
    I'm looking forward to Dhm’Ni becoming closer to Nalani and I'm so glad that he feels so relaxed and comfortable with her
    - even if he is a virgin - yum.

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  • From ANON - Cara on October 23, 2006
    Really? Which island? I'm on oahu.
    Christmas time isn't really a good season...it gets rainy and a wee bit cold (like 75 degrees omg it feels like the effing Artic lol)
    Yaaaaaay chapter 21!!
    Dhm'ni is so sweet. Can't wait to see how they grow closer.
    Hilarious part when Nala says she thinks the Kainde amedha hunt is a good way of thining the herd. I laughed out loud when they tried the toothpaste. lol. I would love to be in a bath tub full of naked male yautjas. mmmmmmmm. God everyone says the yautja are well hung but like how many inches?
    I'm curious.
    Btw did I tell you I love your long chapters?
    Only thing is you can separate the dialogue so it makes it a little easier to read. hopefully the next chapter will be coming soon. :)
    -Cara
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 09, 2006
    Wow I've spent ....maybe three hours reading this whole story.
    My eyes are tired. :(

    1. I love Nalani. She is such an awesome character, very funny too. I wish I could kick ass like her. (btw I live in Hawai'i. Have you ever lived there?)
    2. I love Dh'nmi. I prolly spelt that wrong. My favourite parts are when they talk and boy I really hope something happens between them...it's sweet how protective he is.
    3. I love how all of your characters are different and original. Your writing is fresh and exciting. Much action too. I love it. Love the story. Great job.

    Cheers on your 20th chappie. =) Amazingly your chapters are long, which is great because I hate short chapters. Take your time writing the 21st if it means you'll be writing as addictively great as you have been. Er, hope my sentences make sense. It's sorta late.
    Anywayyyyyyy some gramatical errors but other than that I thoroughly enjoyed this story, so far. =)

    -Cara
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  • From ANON - Prairiefire on October 08, 2006
    Way good.

    Nala's right when she said no one needs to roar before each charge. If it didn't intimidate your opponent the first time, it's not going to work the second, third, fourth and so on. It will just show that you are immature and are going to get yourself killed sooner rather than later.

    Sya, Sya, Sya-He is such an awesome father figure. Just the right amount of patience with the right amount of firmness to teach effectively.

    Those implants sound horrible. I think I will stick with my theory of vacuum seals and hidden lacings/buckles.
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  • From ANON - Narranasa on October 08, 2006
    I simply love this story. It's intriguing, gives good background to the characters, and is well written in general.

    Just like your other story. :)
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  • From ANON - Prairiefire on October 04, 2006
    I don't know what to say other than I want to know more. More. MORE! All those little details you kind of include, but then wrap in a shroud of mystery make this story intoxicatingly addictive.

    I must say that I am relieved that Dhmn'Ni and Nala aren't at each other's throats as much any more. It really sucks when you hate your roommate.
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