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Reviews for The Ripple of a Stone

By : vanillalace
  • From ANON - Liz on December 14, 2006
    Oh, it's cruel to leave it there. It's also cruel to have us pick a single favourite scene when all of them are so good, but I love the interactions between Nala and Dhm'ni. Funny, sweet, sad, it's all there. And I know it's rather redundant, but I hope you add another chapter or two soon.
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  • From ANON - Death God Dist on December 14, 2006
    Hah, wonderful chapter, and I loved the tie-in to your side-story about Nala's scars (and yes, everyone should be reading that one also) :)

    I'm also enjoying the growing conflict between Dhm'Ni and Dhyot’te’ka. I guess now that Dhm' is thinking about Nala more and more than just an annoying roommate, he's starting to get jealous. Of course, Dhyo' has always made it clear he wants Nala sexually (which I've always found curious about him as isn't he supposed to be a "vicious 'Ooman' hunter"?), and even Thr’ik thinks of her that way too. I did enjoy Dyne running away like a coward too, I hope Nala beats his ass one day. Oh well, I can't wait to see who you decide to pair her off with first, because you have had the knack for doing something unexpected in that regard, like with your other story. :)

    As for my favorite part of the story, well, I can't really name a part, since that implies that I enjoy something more than another, and I can't say that because I love the entire package. The characters and the interactions between then truly make this a remarkable piece of writing. Of course, I do hate to say it that even I notice some editing problems - mainly wrong/misplaced words, nothing spelled wrong - but given that you write such long chapters (a very good thing BTW!!!), even I can see how hard it would be to have to go through it all and not miss anything.

    Oh well, keep up the grand work and I can't wait for future installments in both your stories, as usual.
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  • From ANON - aquamum on December 14, 2006
    As for my favourite part of this story.........
    is seeing the email in my inbox giving me the link to the next FABULOUS (because they always are) chapter...........
    hee hee
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  • From ANON - aquamum on December 14, 2006
    I've waited for this situation to happen, but didn't think it would come about as the result of a dream.
    Well Done.
    Beautifully written.
    I look forward to seeing what happens next...................
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  • From ANON - Cara on December 14, 2006
    Ohp forgot to put in my fav parts:
    The last erotic scene between Dom and Nala
    When Nala said she thinks the hunts are a way of keeping the population balanced (or something)
    When she battled the Queen
    When she first met Lord K and the drama that sort of followed between them
    The fight between her and the guy who insulted Allen (forget who)
    I'm sure there are more great scenes but I just can't remember right now.
    -C
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  • From ANON - Cara on December 14, 2006
    Agggh I didn't review the last chapter cuz I was checking AFF real quick, so I'll make up for it in this review-
    As always, you are such a brilliant writer. You combine unique, realistic characters in a very original setting with a nail biting plot (all those cliffhangers!!) and can't forget your humour! I love how the whole story isn't so serious, you keep the light things and heavy things balanced, really amazing. The only thing that keeps this story from being perfect (and it is so much, believe me!) are the typos. You have alot of typos, and I really hate to be a grammar freak but it will really help because they distract me. Do you have a beta or something?
    I can't believe the C'jit chappie's ending...wow that little bit of erotica really got me going..dayummm. Haha I do hope you continue with their relationship, because I know Dom (just calling him that, it's easier) is jealous of Dy'ot'teka (forgive me spelling :(). I think there will be alot of UST following this chapter between Dom and Nala..and rivalry between Dom and Dy'Oatie.
    Ehhh I have not yet read the background story but I promise I willlllll. I dunno why, I guess I've been saving it.
    Man things are getting so much juicier!! This story rocks EM :) :)
    Your loyal fan,
    Cara
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on December 13, 2006
    Holy Crapsticks!!! I so did not see that coming. As alwayz, awesome work. I can't wait to see more.

    My favorite line from this fic is: 'She's not lost. She's just locationally challenged.' I do not as of yet have a favorite part. But hopefully, that will change in the future. :)
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  • From ANON - Lovydovy on December 13, 2006
    Naughty to make us wait to see how they deal. Love the bath gatherings conversation. I like them naughty males too. More good stuff.
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  • From ANON - missy on December 01, 2006
    hi,
    so are you still going to develop a relationship between Dhm’Ni and Nala in this story or abandon it.

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  • From ANON - angelpred on December 01, 2006
    Wow,wow,wow......is always more fantastic!!!!
    I love Nala and Dhm'ni,they are so cute together!!!!
    Brilliant work,you are very good to write!!
    I love too Sya and his affection for Nala,is very protective!!!
    I want to know the secret of Sya,please.....
    Can't wait to read more!!
    I think that the new "the ripple of a stone stories" is very interesting...is a good work!!!
    Please update soon.....!!!!!!!!!


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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on November 30, 2006
    Brilliant work as alwayz. I love these characters. They have so much life. I can actually see them going through day to day life. That scene in the observation deck was so touching. And I just love the little bits of humor you throw into the mix. There are so many great things about this story, that I would have to spend all night just pointing them out. Don't let anyone change the way you write. I live for it. Can't wait till the next update! =D
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  • From ANON - Death God Dist on November 30, 2006
    Wonderful, wonderful and more wonderful! :)

    You certainly got a very big chunk of writing done in between updates with this chapter and the other chapter of side-stories. It still amazes me the level of detail you are able to put in your writing and how convincing all the situations are made because of it. And of course, keeping the humor in the story goes a long way to making it enjoyable.

    Not much more I can say that I haven't already said, just that as usual, I'll be waiting eagerly for more. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 17, 2006
    Wow, I love Nalas and Dhm'Nis connections, they are so cute together! But I think the other reviewers have forgotten that Nalas parents, who I cant remember the names of, were sent to Hawaii when they died and so she stayed with her uncle, who I again cant remember the name of, but she lived in Hawaii and was given a Hawaiian name. But with this latest chapter we learn even more about Nalas old life, BUT THE AUTHOR DID IT AGAIN AND SHE STOPPED THE CHAPTER RIGHT AT A REVEAL! It is so evil but so good! I am sure that the author will explain in her next update, she always explains things if something is confusing, but I thought I would just say because I remembered. Nala isn’t a blood Hawaiian, I think I remember it being said her father was Irish… I can’t remember, I just keep thinking about Nala and Dhm'Ni!!!!! I WANT THOSE TWO TOGETHER! Please…
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  • From ANON - Death God Dist on November 17, 2006
    Nalani's Hawaiian? Didn't see that one coming, especially with the Red Hair. :)

    Great chapter as usual, and thanks for the shout out for my comments. :)

    Can't wait to read more. And I too wish I could visualize Nala's new outfits.
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  • From ANON - Cara on November 16, 2006
    How can Nalani be Hawai'ian and have red hair?
    I've never seen a H. with red hair. o_o
    A few typos.
    But great job. I'm glad you put a little info on Nala's background.
    I really wish I could see her armour.
    And oh the scenes b/w her and Dom are so sweet. Wish there were more. :p

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