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Reviews for The Ripple of a Stone

By : vanillalace
  • From DeathGodDist on July 15, 2007
    Come back Nalani! I really wan't to see how this one turns out. Hope you haven't left for good. :(
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  • From tammathaamr on June 18, 2007
    I like this story and always look forward to the updates, I was really glad to see the last one, that was posted last month ( hint hint hint) ;D

    Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Koi on May 30, 2007
    I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE IT FOR ME!!!!!!!! I WANT TO NO WUT HAPPENES NEXT.....PLEASE PLEASE DO IF FOR MEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
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  • From fury on May 28, 2007
    Thank Goodness u are back, i love your stories especially the ripple stone and alex's house. Hope you update again soon..since its your stories i mainly come to read.
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  • From TheWinterWolf on May 22, 2007
    Beautiful! BEAUTIFUL!! Please tell me there's more to come. Because if there's not...I just might cry.
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  • From on May 20, 2007
    i like this. you should have more comments.

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  • From DeathGodDist on May 18, 2007
    Now that was quite a riveting chapter. Sad too, but that only goes to show how good your writing is. Poor Dhy, he had the misfortune of being the one who was most outward of wanting to be close to Nala, and thus, it was not to be. The new guy is also interesting, I wonder how he will fit into all this in the future.

    Keep writing. :)
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  • From prairiefire on May 18, 2007
    It is so good to see an update here. It was...

    Gods, I want to say it was wonderful, but GODS...you took away my CHOCOLATE. Do you have any idea how long it took me to read that. It took me 5 minutes to realize I stopped mid sentence and just stared at the screen because I didn't want to read about him dying, especially in Nala's arms. But I did get through it. I won't say I wasn't crying, but I did manage to read it. And then I started crying more when Sya said she had to leave him.

    Then when the little bastard backhanded her. GRRRRRRRR!. Vek wanted some words with the boy. He's lucky he made up for it, or Vek might have jumped outta my story just to give him the ass kicking he deserves.

    Then, the very end, you have me hopeful. Hopeful, and waiting for another update.

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  • From ANON - missy on May 18, 2007
    it's soo good to see an update of this story.love this chapter
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on May 17, 2007
    You made me cry! It is very hard to do that. So congrats to you. Awesome update and I can't wait to see what comes next!!
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  • From ANON - aquamum on April 27, 2007
    Hey welcome back - it's great to see you posting another chapter in this excellent story.

    So much has happened in this chapter for me to comment on - so let me say this - the storyline continues to thrill the reader - your words are moving and powerful and I love the ever developing relationships between all your characters.

    Please post again soon.


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  • From DeathGodDist on April 21, 2007
    Wow, what a great chapter to bring back the story. The fight scene was totally awesome, and the character development is still top knotch. Really interesting that even though Nala made it through the challenge (though with two less fingers) alright, she's probably at her lowest point since meeting the Yautja. You really bring out well the despair she is feeling, and how in her mind, Sya is probably the only one left that she believes truly cares for her.

    Looking forward to seeing how things progress, keep up the great work. :)
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  • From littlemissy1503 on April 20, 2007
    It's wonderful to see you back with a really great update.
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  • From prairiefire on April 19, 2007
    Poor Dhy, trying so hard to impress Nala with his trophies just to get shot down.

    The fight scene was AWESOME!!!!! I wish mine came out like that.


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  • From ANON - Cara on April 19, 2007
    Oh my God. This chapter was incredible. I actually cried when Nala said her motto to Ras'Lech before she blacked out. It was really touching. And the fight scene was beautifully described. I was hanging onto every word, it was that intense. But Nala isn't paralyzed below the waist, right?
    Ras'Lech is a very interesting character, you really bring him (and everyone else) to life. I'm curious to learn a little bit more about him.
    Oh man now you're really developing Nala and Dom's relationship. Poor Dhy'oe'teka (sp?) though lol he was showing her his trophies. Who is this red and white striped yautja? Very curious. I'm sure you'll answer our questions though.
    I always thought it was deja vu...do you know French?
    But wow. Just wow. I was so excited to see that you had finally updated!! :) This was definitely worth the wait. Don't stop being talented!
    -Cara
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