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Reviews for The Ripple of a Stone

By : vanillalace
  • From Sinvisigoth on February 01, 2008
    I started reading chapter one at half nine yesterday morning and finished chapter thirty-two at about five this morning. I think I am going to explode if they don't get it together soon. This is an amazing story and some of the best characterisation I've ever come across; I can't stop thinking about Dhm'ni and Nala and I feel as frustrated as they must at the total lack of shagging! Please please please please please update soon! A proclamation of undying love would be great at some point but for the sake of all that's merciful and just, please let them get it on.
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  • From ANON - cara sky on January 07, 2008
    i'm glad you allow anon reviews so now i can review easier lol. i'm horribly lazy and i feel bad that i havent reviewed simply because i didnt want to log in. i did add ROAS to my recommended reading list on my account. it's a shame the predator lovers are so small because this truly is a great story that everyone should read.
    for an unbearable amount of time i had no access to AFF, i don't know why. i was incredibly happy to see you had added your stories to FF.
    anyhoo, i agree with julia down below. nala was totally lying when she said she didn't want to mate with him but her fear of rejection is understandable, after all he just slept with tegon (grrrr) and now has a baby with her! double wtf! as a fellow writer though i understand this twist was needed to...nvm don't want to spoil anything. but i was disappointed that nala wasn't angry with him. i would have been furious. and i wouldn't have come to sleep with him either. so for a strong character like nala who defends herself and demands respect, she didn't act in character to me at least.
    i really love the part where nala is mourning to herself that she'll probably never have a family in the predator world and was feeling lonely. i have to admit i was tearing up at that.
    and where is aja? i wanted a scene with him! i think..that if things don't work out with dhm'ni or she plans to retaliate and mate with someone else (unlikely, but still) aja is a prime choice. i really like him. i like dhm'ni too, confusing male that he is. so what's going to happen with him and tegon? and will nala win the fight with ferca? i get the feeling she will. she fought the patriarch i think she can handle a yautja female. but will she mate with dhm'ni?
    argh so many questions! every day i come here to check and see if you've updated so again i agree with julia add me to your mailing list if it exists!

    congrats on your marriage, i hope things go smoothly and your wedding is a blast! :)
    -cara
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  • From ANON - Julia on January 07, 2008
    Ok, consider yourself special because I do not review stories. Ever. I just spent the last 3 days reading nonstop. My eyes are just about shot (I had to increase font size so I could keep reading around the middle of day 2). I'm completely and utterly enthralled by "The Ripple of a Stone" this is about the 5th Predator fanfic I've read and It is delightful. However, since I just read everything in one 3 day shot, I have no idea how often you post. I'm really hoping and praying it is soon because I actually thought this story was complete when I started reading it and I am desperate to read what happens next. I love Nala- she's a great character with strong flaws and strengths. This whole thing with Dhm'ni is intense and I really can't wait to know whats going to happen now that there has be a challenge for mating with him. I highly doubt Ferca will will, but I know Nala will have her fair share of injuries. The real question is...what will happen between Nala and Dhm'ni. She's completly lying when she says she doesn't want to mate him- I think its more that she doesn't think he wants to mate her and thats why she's saying what she is. The sexual driven scenes you've written so far are wonderful...This is me hoping that we get another one in chapter 33 ;-).

    Do you have a mailing list alerting when you update RoaS? If so could you please put me on it?

    Thanks ~ J
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on December 31, 2007
    Well, if that is a quick chapter, I'm not sure I want to see a long one! LOL. Glad to see you are not leaving this one to rot. I love this fic. Can't wait to see more! =D
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on December 30, 2007
    Yes! Finally another twistingly good chapter. More soon please. I think Nala should deflower Nder and bear him a child should she and Dhimni not work it out.
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  • From DeathGodDist on December 30, 2007
    Yay! I'm so happy you found the inspiration to make a new chapter! Oh, and lol @ calling this a "short chapter". Believe me, I'd be happy if more fics had chapters this "short" :D

    I still am really feeling for Nala, she's finally coming to terms with her situation and trying to figure out where she can go from here. She's managed to survive, but is there anything for her beyond mere survival? I wouldn't be suprised if she becomes more and more withdrawn as time goes by since the only thing she knows she can do well amongst the Yautja is fight. Reading her struggle with her feelings for Dhm'Ni is also very moving, hearing he's going to be a daddy really shocked her, of course, being a human where such a thing spells the end for any possible relationship.

    Oh and of course, I can't wait to see what Nala's gonna do with Ferca, since she's definitely going to snap soon like she did on the ship after Allen was insulted.
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  • From littlemissy1503 on December 30, 2007
    yes!!! so glad to see a new chapter...hope you update soon.
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  • From prairiefire on December 30, 2007
    It's about time Ferca gets her ass kicked by Nala. I've been waiting for this fight for a while. Don't leave us hanging so long next time.
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  • From ANON - Reiki on December 30, 2007
    Awsome! Please, Please don't take so long to update next time!
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on September 30, 2007
    Update please! Can't take the suspense!
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  • From prairiefire on July 31, 2007
    Nala better be prepared for a very messy scene with Det and Dyne. She's probably gonna have to kill one, or both (crosses fingers), of them.

    The girls, gotta love them. I just wonder what screaming and running from the piercing will do to her status in the eyes of the Matriarch. Not saying that I would have stuck around, but, that's gonna cost her. Unless of course, the Matriarch finds something to make up for that show of "cowardice."
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  • From DeathGodDist on July 30, 2007
    It's so wonderful when you update this story, even though it's been going for a while, it doesn't feel like it's getting old or stale at all, and that there is plenty more to come.

    Wow, Det and Dyne are really sick mofos. No wonder Dhm'Ni doesn't care for his brother, he might as well have Itachi for a brother. :)

    It's great to see Nala finally meet the females, and yeah, that piercing scene was hillarious. Nice homage to your other story with the name 'Aja' too. :)

    Still looking forward to more, whenever you have the time of course.
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  • From littlemissy1503 on July 30, 2007
    so glad that you update this story. laugh my ass off about the piercing thing.
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on July 30, 2007
    WhooHoo for updates. I do so love your stories. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - PurpleBeetlejuice on July 26, 2007
    It's the best predator fanfiction i have ever read!! I haven't found better than this!(and i must say i read a lot of them)I almost every week look here and wait for the magic 31st chapter. When i was at first started reading it i was so long in front of my screen that when i stopped for food my eyes where almost red!
    What would you say that Nalani would understand that she had feelings for dihmni? But of course she thinks that since she's a ooman she don't have a chance in a challenge like this (which is dihmnis hear). i know it's plain but with good problems infront of her i think it could be a nice plot.
    Understanding that she is mearly an ooman (in the sexual relationship) she would back off from dhimni, which piss him of a bit ;P
    But that's only a suggestion.
    Just can't wait for another chapter! And i love you style of writting.
    Let the god of the writter bleased with inspiration!

    *P.S. Sorry for mistakes english is not my native language. XD
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