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Reviews for The Ripple of a Stone

By : vanillalace
  • From ANON - Alice B on March 31, 2009
    very very good-drools- can't wait for the next chap.
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  • From ANON - Hitori on March 09, 2009
    Writing Quicklist in case you don't get a steady beta! =D


    Differences between:

    "to" and "too"

    "to" I am going to the store. I am sending this to my friend.
    "too" It is too much money. There are too many of them.

    "Presents" and "Presence"

    Presents is for giving gifts or presents and presence is someone's presence, like them being there.

    "sense" and "since"

    sense, your senses and since like "Since you've last visited." "Since last year."

    The Thers...

    "There" as in "There they are." or "Over there." there is a place.

    "They're" as in "They are" "They're going to the mall."

    "Their" is possesion like "Their house is on fire." "There is their car."

    and also..

    "You're" is "You are" "You're going to work?"

    "Your" as in "Is this your bag?" posession.

    "S"

    You put the uppy comma thing to show posession of something. like "Nala's bag" "Frank's clothes" "Fred's idea" "That guy's idea" "That girl's idea" "That man's stuff" and without a uppy comma thing is plurals. So when you put "Nalas" it's like there is more than one of her. "There are many birds" "The speakers are very loud."

    Just in case:

    "Than" and "Then"

    "Than" "He has more than me." "He is bigger than me."

    "Then" as in sequences of events. "First he will get on the bus then he will go home." "Then they will call."

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    There's (also for "there is" I forgot that one) some other stuff but that's all I can think of right now. Well they're the most frequent.
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    I'm sorry, I love your story a lot but the writing starts to get to me sometimes! Keep on doing great fics!
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  • From atlanteangoddess on March 03, 2009
    I am so amazed with the emotion of your story........ I need more!!!
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  • From ANON - Justin on February 28, 2009
    Yea what Death God Dist said.
    This story has taken over my life!
    I can't stop thinking about it Arrrgggg!!!
    By the way do you still use your viper_shock@hotmail.com address?

    Justin
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  • From DeathGodDist on February 28, 2009
    Oh my goodness. This was just such a beautifully written and moving chapter, I'm still in awe. I'm always amazed at your incredible ability to "change the flow" of the story so many times in the space of a single chapter like this latest one. From the pain and despair of the beginning (and the end of the last chapter) to the hope and mystery in the middle (transformation) to the joy and happiness soon after (resurrection) and only for that to be snuffed out at the end just as quickly as it began.

    Now, if I may interject here. I must say, your ability to "tease" the reader is truly second to none. I cannot even recall how many times during this story you had me going, thinking that something was finally going to happen, only to snatch it out of reach just at that critical moment before the point of no return. Now, I hope you do not think of this as a complaint. Far from it, it only serves to keep the reader coming back begging for more, as I will gladly do so. :D

    Having been reading this story and following the characters for so long now and, it has come to the point where, anything from here on out will have such a more powerful impact than simply reading a story that can be done with in a day. It's like a TV show like LOST (for me anyway :)) where you become so engrossed with the characters over time anything that happens after a while becomes more meaningful. Such is definitely the case with this story for me. :)

    Well, once again, Bravo my dear. I will once again continue to look forward to whatever the future may bring from you with this wonderful tale. ***applause***
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  • From ANON - Justin on February 27, 2009
    Wow I'm lucky, I checked the site just as you had updated.
    The new chapter is great but it's a killer just the same.
    I have a feeling the next few chapters are gonna be so sad...
    Best story I have EVAR read, there I said it.
    Can't wait for the next installment already.

    Justin
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  • From midnighteyes on January 25, 2009
    This is on hell of a story... I am defiently hooked!!! I am not even caught up and i want more!!! Thank you again for sharing and keep up the good work!!
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  • From ANON - Razielum on January 20, 2009
    This story is incredible. Poor Nala. At every turn something bad happens to her. I like the way her and Dhm'ni's relationship is working out. Very sweet in a weird way. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - mariedarkangel on January 08, 2009
    Yeah!!!! My favorite story on the net is finaly updated! Thank you!!!
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  • From midnighteyes on January 07, 2009
    I just found this story and i am doing a happy dance.. This story is damn good!! I am so hooked on it.. Thank you so much for sharing..
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  • From ANON - Kris on January 04, 2009
    I was soo happy when i saw the new chapter, I am really glad that you didn't give up writing such a great story. I can't wait to see what will happen next.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 28, 2008
    Man! When I saw a new chapter I had to read a few previous chapter to remember the story. Lol. Its ok, I forgive you. Thanx 4 updating and I can't wait to read what happens
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  • From Sinvisigoth on December 27, 2008
    Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you for your most recent chapter; it's the best Christmas present I've had. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From DeathGodDist on December 26, 2008
    OMG!!! You're back!!! I had feared that you had completely given up writing altogether. I'm so very glad that hasn't been the case! :)

    I hope things are well with you now. As you said no one knows what has happened with you these past months, but hopefully whatever it was, it is done now and you're back to being ok. Again, it is just so great to have you back! :D

    Reading the chapter reminds me why I love your writing to begin with and I truly did miss your style. Once again I can thankfully look forward to anticipating updates from you. Welcome back! :)
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  • From ANON - Amanda on December 26, 2008
    YAY! You made my holiday! Woooooo *pats on the back*

    Ok, now I have to read it allllll over before I can read this chapter--shazam.

    Keep writing, hope all is well in your life!
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