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Reviews for Mary and Bert: A Jolly Holiday

By : SandyLeeAnn
  • From lordoberon on October 28, 2008
    Oh, wow. I clicked on this because the pairing made me chuckle and my eyes goggle in surprise. But actually, this is quite hot! I love how you describe Mary and how Bert touches her....mmm. Also, the way you keep their language in character even through the sex is absolutely titillating and makes me giggle.

    Good job!
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  • From in2itivelady on June 24, 2008
    Finally! A Mary and Bert smut fic :D You just made my day! I totally have to agree with you there, they totally had some sexual tension going on throughout the movie. I'm glad someone took up the task of finally getting them together--and it was well written too! Ah, good smut with a pair of character I actually like! Well done.
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  • From fire4ashz on May 28, 2008
    that was some freaky stuff right there i'll never be able to watch mary poppins again and i'm sorry bout you being tortured by your roommate and their kid
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  • From ANON - Billy on December 15, 2006
    Ow, my childhood memories of this film have burned and died.

    ....I love it!! Very hot indeed. When it's on at Christmas this year, I won't be able to stop laughing and thinking of this. It's fantastic.
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  • From ANON - Caryme on November 15, 2006
    Must add another thought here - please consider doing a Category Request for Mary Poppins so that this is listed under that title on the main movie page. This story is so great- I would hate to see it languish in "Misc Movies" where I almost missed it myself!
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  • From ANON - Caryme on November 14, 2006
    This is one of the best stories I have read here. Nice characterization of both Mary and Bert, especially Bert. Everything about this fic is great.
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  • From Nanaea on October 06, 2006
    Thank you! I've been waiting for that to happen since I was 12, I swear. Overall it was very well written. I thought the dialogue was spot on. I especially liked "She tasted like honey and spring all rolled into one." and "Her head fell back as she tried to remember how to breathe, or if she even needed to."

    One suggestion, leave a blank line between each paragraph - it makes it easier to read. I noticed one spelling error (cress for caress), and a couple of places where it seemed you had left a word out. A beta should catch those things for you as it's very hard to see them yourself. Great work! I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - S.J. on September 25, 2006
    Holy mother of...wow. That was so weird. Yet hot. I love the dialogue.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 12, 2006
    You deserve about a billion kudos points for writing a Mary Poppins sex story. Although Mary & Bert getting it on isn't exactly my usual cup of tea, the story was nicely done. I don't think I have seen anything this subversive in my entire life.
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