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Reviews for Silk

By : JacksMermaid
  • From ANON - Anni on September 19, 2006
    And here we thought it was just going to be hot sex! A great story as well. Thank you, and KEEP WRITING!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 19, 2006
    I am thoroughly enjoying your story, Silk. You have an exceptional talent for keeping the characters true to their on-film persona, while taking the story where so many of us wish it would go.... Repeatedly I am impressed with your ability to give Jack comments or thoughts that keep his character right on target. First, his dialogue sounds like Jack - not the stereotypical pirate with the "Arrhs" and "Matey" that are so common in other fanfiction. Frequently I feel like it is Barbossa romancing Elizabeth instead of Jack! Your writing perfectly illustrates his movements, expressions and words. Some of my favorites are:
    "Didn't see that coming, came the distant thought in his brain, and then his hands were up and around her"
    "M'often on deck. It's my ship."
    "Was not. Couldn't see a bloody thing," he smirked at her
    "Are you positive you know what you're doing, or do you want to fight some more?"
    The erotic parts are fabulous. The details are sexy and steamy - without being crass or sickenly sweet. You have an awesome talent. I will continue to check your site daily for updates. Thanks for sharing....



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  • From ANON - Madamx on September 12, 2006
    I'm pretty sure I had ice in my drink when I started reading this story. :-D

    I love it!! Update soon! :-)
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  • From ANON - soph on September 12, 2006
    okay that was the hottest sex scene i've ever read seriously. i've read alot. yours was pure torture, and i can just feel for elizabeth. but i love tortue! which made this scene so damn hot! you wrote this very well! you should be so proud! even if your not happy with it i think we all know the readers are!! hehe. please update soon. your story is very good.
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  • From ANON - Naomi on September 12, 2006
    damn. wow. hot. very very very hot. real words are not coming to me. but damn. thanks.
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  • From ANON - Sushi on September 11, 2006
    Damn you vile writer!!! Please give more!!! You're torturing us as much as Jack is torturing Liz. And you know it too, don't you? *wags finger at you*
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 11, 2006
    OH this is soooooo fucking awesome. Better than anything!
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  • From ANON - Lady Kaceemort on September 09, 2006
    Oh my. That verbal sparring of Jack's and Elizabeth's was positively perfect. Great story. I really, really have enjoyed it so far.
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  • From ANON - soph on September 09, 2006
    oh please continue!! I'm loving all the teasing between them!! I persoanlly think Lizzie should show Jack what she did to Will...hehehehe. please update soon!!! Much Love xxx
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  • From ANON - Anni on September 09, 2006
    Oh, my. OH, MY!! Sunday night or Monday, huh? I am waiting, impatiently. Extremely hot! I love the 'aggressive' J+E stories. Will really is too much of a wimp for Elizabeth; she needs a MAN. Write fast~!!
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  • From EvilE on September 09, 2006
    Ha, I see you're over here now! Excellent. "Silk" is awesome. Of course, I'd expect nothing less from you... and you left off in such a naughty place... damn you! :-) Can't WAIT for Chapter 3...
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  • From ANON - Animamates on September 09, 2006
    Like it! Waiting impatiently to see what happens!
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