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Reviews for Slave Planet: WAR OF THE BLOOD FIENDS!

By : boye
  • From Ambrosia on June 27, 2015
    ...ok...this started as something possibly believable, though frankly the writing style is certainly geared toward a male audience. Then...well, "Riddick" kept eating the "drug-leaf" like candy, knowing the side effects (which logically speaking would preclude their use, especially if the aphrodisiac effects were powerful enough to be a distraction). Riddick being Riddick wouldn't really do that. It would be too much of a distraction and having an erection would be far too much of a physical impairment during a potential combat situation for him to make that sort of decision. This should be listed as AU, as the prior reviewer has said. I skipped ahead to another chapter and noted that the writing did improve, but as soon as it flipped back to "Riddick's" viewpoint it went back to....well, what it is. This feels far more like some kind of AU/Self Insertion than actual Riddick. And I busted a gut laughing in the first chapter when he..."relieved his tension." I suddenly wonder if real people actually say such things. I doubt it, outside of a porno...y'know this could easily be rewritten and a "Gor" fic. *snrk* And a comedy.
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  • From ANON - Velma on September 26, 2006
    Terrible. Just awful. You should catergorize this at the very least as AU. This is fan fiction and creative license is given but this is just gross and unappealing. You have no feel whatsoever for the character of Riddick or his mannerisms. Have you even ever seen Pitch Black or the Chronicles of Riddick ? How old are you anyway because I know first-graders who could string sentences together better.
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