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Reviews for Return to the Labyrinth

By : Gaeliceyes
  • From kookookitty on May 23, 2007
    the invasion of the BLACK SLIME!! was that sarah's doing or is there something sinister afoot? something jareth is familiar with because he only contained it instead of eliminating it.

    the first lesson didn't go too well... i don't understand why he didn't ask to see the results of the magic she thinks she performed and her state of mind prior to it's actuality.

    i love tripping through the imaginations of gifted and talented writers!

    ciao!
    ginny
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  • From misted on May 23, 2007
    Still my favourite Labyrinth fanfic. I like how you're buildning your world slowly.
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  • From luna26 on May 22, 2007
    I still check very often for updates and you don't disapoint. :) Great job another thrilling chapter, keep up the great work
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  • From kookookitty on April 25, 2007
    it has been bugging me... yep, i misspelled 'waned'.

    some beta reader i am!

    sorry,
    ginny
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  • From kookookitty on April 23, 2007
    i can't believe this isn't getting reviews!

    the story is really good and the imagry is spectacular... interest in the movie must have wained but never give up hope, this story will be in the archives for those with new and renewed interest to find and read!

    yes, i am patiently waiting for your next installment.

    >=)
    ginny
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  • From kookookitty on April 18, 2007
    eloquent as always.

    ginny
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  • From misted on April 11, 2007
    One of the best Labyrinth stories I've read. I love the mix between fairy tales, faerie and movie. The story is captivating and original, and the descriptions are gorgeous. I especially loved "a stallion that seemed no more than smoke, but it’s hooves struck the rocky ground with a sound like steel". The characterizations of Jareth and Sarah feel like they are firmly rooted in the movie, but with an extra added myth dimension. The conversations are more down to earth than the descriptions, but they synch beautifully together, keeping the story firmlt between ground and air.

    Thank you for what you've written; I look forward to new chapters!
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  • From kookookitty on April 10, 2007
    i don't usually review the work i beta however i believe you and your story deserve even more recognition than you are recieving... therefore my review.

    keep 'em coming!
    ginny
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  • From Operamuse on April 05, 2007
    I cannot believe that more people have not reviewed. Your story is incredible. The plot is such a different take on Sarah going back to the Labyrinth but it works so well! And you really made me feel thw whimsey and magic that you're supposed to feel reading a Labyrinth fiction. Not to mention that you actually have Sarah and Jareth in character. I love what you've done with him in particaular. He's every bit of the Gobiln King he's supposed to be. Excellent job. I cannot wait for an update!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 03, 2007
    Absolute genius! The first Labyrinth fic I've read, and I think you do a wonderful job! I really can't wait until he finds out who she is! You should update very quickly, because I love your writing!
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  • From AyekaPenor on April 01, 2007
    "Twiggy squirmed in her grip like a ferret on speed, but to no avail."
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  • From luna26 on March 31, 2007
    I'm so glad you're continuing this story! Keep up the great work. :)
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  • From Gaki on March 31, 2007
    YAY!! Finally a update!! I love this story and I really hope you update soon!
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  • From Dazana on March 31, 2007
    Excellent! Lovely job so far....can't wait for more!
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  • From kookookitty on March 27, 2007
    oh, i forgot!

    if you need help editing, i can beta (i don't do lemons though)
    general address on profile page, i will give you the other address if you contact me.

    gin



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