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Reviews for Return to the Labyrinth

By : Gaeliceyes
  • From hollilia on August 10, 2007
    AGH! I have waited long for this! PLEASE DONT MAKE ME WAIT TOO LONG FOR THE NEXT ONE!
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  • From rover94 on August 08, 2007
    I love the poetry at the end...Hurry up and update PLEASE!!!
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  • From ewasnow on July 29, 2007
    Spent the night reading through this fic. This is such a different take on things. Wonderful! As for poems, here you go. I got 'em from a book called Valient. The author, Holly Black, put poems in her other book, Tithe, but I don't have that one.

    For I shall learn from flower and leaf
    That color every drop they hold,
    To change the lifeless wine of grief
    To living gold.
    -Sara Teasdale, "Alchemy"

    Trying their wings once more in hopeless flight:
    Blind moths against the wires of window screens.
    Anything. Anything for a fix of light.
    -X.J. Kennedy, "Street Moths"

    I have found the warm caves in the woods,
    filled them with skillets, carvings, shelves,
    closets, silks, innumerable goods;
    fixed the suppers for the worms and the elves.
    -Anne Sexton, "Her Kind"

    We must not look at goblin men,
    We must not buy their fruits:
    Who knows upon what soil they fed
    Their hungry thirsty roots?
    -Christina Rossetti, "Goblin Market"

    Nothing father then he uttered-not a feather then he fluttered-
    Till I scarcely more then muttered, "Other friends have flown before-
    On the morrow he will leave me, as my Hopes have flown before."
    Then the bird said, "Nevermore."
    -Edgar Allen Poe, "The Raven"

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  • From TigerEyes on July 25, 2007
    such a long time to wait for a short chapter ; ;
    meh, it could have been novel long and still too short for me lol
    More Please!!!
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  • From ewasnow on July 19, 2007
    Ya know, I usually only come to AFF for the "heat" but when I find a story like this...Damn. Never mind the rating, this is a truly interesting tale! Thank you so much for sharing it!
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  • From misted on July 16, 2007
    Lovely chapter. Impressive how you managed to keep the fairy tale feelng and still make the attraction between Jareth and Sarah very real, and very hot.
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  • From Dazana on July 14, 2007
    Very well written! Love it! Need more though....ASAP!
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  • From SailorAurora on June 30, 2007
    Very excellent fanfiction! had me reading all the way.... left me wanting more.

    I hope you really do update soon sometimes...
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  • From TigerEyes on June 30, 2007
    So I recently picked up the official sequal "Return to Labyrinth", granted it's going to be a series thus I can't judge it yet, have to wait and see where it goes... but I must say so far I'm not impressed. Sarah wasn't lookin too hot at all. Also, if that manga book doesn't open a relationship between Jereth/Sarah, I just won't read it. (ok so I know I will anyway) Needless to say, I'm enjoying your story so much more. I like the pure fantasy/magic feel of Jim Henson and I can really see his mupets in your story. I'm sooo glad Hoggle's in it too ^_^
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  • From hollilia on June 29, 2007
    AGH! I resort to begging now! Please, Please! The next chapter! PLEASE! *Grovels on hands and knees*
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  • From TigerEyes on June 26, 2007
    You are an amzing writer, and I don't have the words to express how wonderful I find this story. Nor to express how I shan't forgive you if you don't write more! O.O
    Please continue this story, it's by far one of the best I've ever read.
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  • From luna26 on June 20, 2007
    ohhh....I can't wait. Thanks for updating so soon since the last chapter. The evening is going to get much more interesting for all parties i think. Great job
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  • From Miffietills1988 on June 18, 2007
    I cant wait for you to update, I am really enjoying this tale.
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  • From hollilia on June 16, 2007
    OMG! I loved that story! The one about the princess whose father went insane and wanted to mary her! Donkeyskin! Now I see it! This is a retelling of Donkeyskin! OMG you ROCK! I cannot believe it! You are divinity! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!
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  • From hollilia on June 12, 2007
    Wow,nicely done. I'm very impressed with the thought you put into this story line. The characters seem real and likable, and you portrayed Jareth so well! I wait with bated breath from the next installment. The only thing that irks me is that I believe this will be a LOOOOOOONG fiction, and this only iritates me becasue I'll have to wait while you write it out. The little kid in me is screaming I WANT TO KNOW THE STORY NOW! Oh well, I can only hope this review will spur you on to write faster, long chapters and put them out quickly.


    Ja Ne!
    Hollilia
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