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Reviews for Return to the Labyrinth

By : Gaeliceyes
  • From LyeLye on April 14, 2008
    I really love this story, and you have done so many things that i wished had of happened in the movie. For instance you had jareth tell that old man off with the bird on his head, those pair were annoying as hell. I cant remember anything else because im so tired, ive been reading this since early this afternoon and now its dark outside and almost 11:00PM I wish you the best of luck for your wedding and your hunnymoon However you spell that, and i hope that you will be working on this next chapter real soon. I love this story and im going to be bookmarking it to check if you have updated. ^^
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  • From ewasnow on April 08, 2008
    Sweet addition! I love the old man's sayings.
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  • From HisCoyMistress on April 07, 2008
    Hooray! Another wonderful, wonderful chapter! This update made my day. :0) Things get more and more interesting... was the Jareth-doppleganger in Sarah's dream the same entity as the dark presence in the castle? Ah! It's such a great story! Thanks for the new chapter.
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  • From Caranaraf on March 19, 2008
    I absolutely love your story and I can't wait for the next chapter, but of course with the upcoming events in your real life I understand that it might take a while. But no matter how long it takes, I will wait for you *sobs* ...lol...

    I really wondered on which fairy tale you based this story. In the beginning I thought as well that is was the cinderella-version with the three hazelnuts. BUT per chance I stumbled across an illustration for a story by brothers Grimm on Deviant ART. I liked the picture so I went and read the story and now I'm pretty sure you based your Labyrinth Fic on Cat-skin. Am I right? Am I right?^^

    here's the link to the picture:
    http://bluefooted.deviantart.com/art/Cat-Skin-69339329
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  • From MichiruKaiou on March 05, 2008
    Hello! I don't often leave reviews, but I felt I should let you know how much I enjoyed your story. It's an interesting storyline that I haven't seen before in the Labyrinth fanfiction that I've read, and very enjoyable. I find your original characters to be believable and likable (well, perhaps with the exception of Leila, but she's not intended to be very likable), which - in my experience - isn't very common to find in fanfics. I would really like to see this fic continued. I understand that your life is very busy and hectic now, and of course that must come first. But I hope that eventually, you will be able to write another chapter. It's a good story, and it would be great to see it completed. In any case, best of luck with everything! (Sorry if I rambled a bit... it's late and I'm pretty tired.)
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  • From bella21 on February 24, 2008
    i absolutly LOVE this story!!! congrats on the wedding! please update whenever u can! i love how uve portrayed both sarah and jareth, probably one of the most original stories ive read, and uve actually kept them im character!
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  • From aujahlisa on February 08, 2008
    Thank you for a wonderfully entertaining story. You mentioned a couple chapters back that your story isn't Cinderella - I'm thinking part of your inspiration was one of the Donkey-Skin variants. If you haven't already run across this book, you might consider adding "Deerskin" by Robin McKinley to your list o' books to read.
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  • From gypsyswitch on February 03, 2008
    This is definitely one of the best stories on the site. Please carry on with it to the end - I don't think I could bear being left hanging. Update as soon as you can!
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  • From gambitgurlisis on January 20, 2008
    This is, quite possibly, one of the best fanfics I've ever read--of any fandom. I love it so much, and your writing style is superb! I can't wait for the next chapter. X3 I think I probably check this story for updates more than I check my email! Don't feel like you need to rush, though. The quality of each chapter is TOTALLY worth the waiting.
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  • From CarnalSin on January 19, 2008
    Wonderful!
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  • From TheaSinclaire on January 15, 2008
    Amazing! Interesting originals and everyone in character. I hope preparations for your wedding are going well but we eagerly await the new chapter!
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  • From Illana on January 06, 2008
    Just wanted to add my voice to the storm of voices I have no doubt are crying out for more :) I'm absolutely enthralled. Having only just discovered your story I'm trying to steal myself to not having any more to read for a while as you organise your wedding but don't forget us! Can't wait for the next installment.

    Thanks so much for posting this. It really is brilliant, original and inventive, a great read! Will keep my eye out and good luck with the wedding. Don't wear yourself out too much ;)

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  • From cukid9 on January 04, 2008
    I've just spent the past two days reading this and, after finishing that last chapter, all I can really say is wow.

    Seriously, I feel like I've been struck speechless -no small feat, since I love to talk. Your prose is lovely, your dialogue wonderful and witty. You have added a whole new dimension to these characters and have made me fall in love with them all over again (can Jareth get any sexier?). I held my breath all through Chapter 16, waiting for him to discover it was her, enjoying their banter, the danger of it all, and finally remembered to breathe when she finally escaped. I love the suspense, I love the slow building of tension.

    I hope it doesn't take you TOO long to update again, but, even if it does, I will be patiently and eagerly awaiting your next installment. This was such a joy to read.

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  • From Sangrebloom on December 21, 2007
    I have to say, I love your story. It's built so well, I BELIEVE it. Characterization is well thought and the language of the story fits well! ah it's a Sigh and a half from the usual drivel that's found There and Here!
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  • From ArachneNonafel on December 12, 2007
    I adore your story!! Please finish it!
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