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Reviews for A New Perspective

By : kguillem
  • From KarenLioncourt on May 07, 2007
    AAAAH! Cliffy!! That was great. I'll bet James'll be mighty horrified when Jack tells him he knows. ^^ Cant wait.
    One thing though, in the first chapter you sort of jump between a first person and third person point of view. I think it messes up the impression of the story a bit.
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  • From ANON - holy fuck on November 03, 2006
    holy fuck

    did i mention holy fuck
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  • From ANON - Isabella on October 23, 2006
    Oh my god! I love you! I love this! THIS IS SOOOOO FREAKING HOT! I just loved it! YAY!!! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THE NEW CHAPTER! PLEASE!

    and...

    Just one thing, um.. Can you put more details on the sex?Pretty please?
    anyway, please update new chapter fast... I beg of you.
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  • From ANON - Kat on October 19, 2006
    Keep it coming. A new twist a Sparrington-I have never read one where james actually whores himself out. Very interesting.
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  • From ANON - @##54 on September 29, 2006
    Hey, great story.please update soon!
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  • From ANON - reirei on September 20, 2006
    hey, just giving my support.! I think this story takes a previously thought of plot, but twists it around to give it a new and fresh prespective! keep up the good work.

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  • From ANON - Anon on September 13, 2006
    More!!!!

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  • From ANON - Sorekai on September 11, 2006
    This is great I love it! What is jack going to do? What are those shots? I hate cliff hangers! Please Update!
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  • From ANON - Druanna on September 11, 2006
    The story concept is refreshing, and your flow of storytelling is sound. I am intrigued, I beg you to continue.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 08, 2006
    Update!! Update!! You good writer, must know more!


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  • From ANON - Foxy Fox on September 08, 2006
    O_O And Jack Sparrow's eyes promptly pop out of his head at the sound of that last name...
    CONTINUE PLEASE!!! Excellent chapter, great pacing, you definitely hook your audience. Don't be afraid to get more descriptive about where Norri is at and the other characters he's interacting with. Peter especially could be fleshed out some more. I was also desperate for more descriptions of Norri himself, he's clearly thinner, yet how else has he changed, is his hair longer now? What does he do when he is not *cough* on his back, what is his relationship with his pimp (aside the obvious and being his drug dealer)? after all most pimps have more then one whore, are there others like poor James. Ect. Stuff like that.
    Either way I cant wait for the next chapter! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 08, 2006
    Ah! You must continue, what an evil place to end this part! Love this fic, you must go on!
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  • From ANON - Eol's Hammer on September 08, 2006
    Holy crap this is good! I'm hooked, poor James! Speaking of hooked, what is james addicted to, Lodnum, opeum?

    I do have one little complaint though. I want more descriptions! Clothes, bodies and places. Great fic either way!
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