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Reviews for Lost At Sea

By : junkpuppet
  • From ANON - Michelle on September 18, 2006
    Loved the way you ended this story with going back into the past and having Jack choosing a different path. Should make the sequel very interesting and completey different than his life before. I must comment I Especially loved the part when it was described that Jack could not live long without Liv. Very touching. The next sequel with Jack and Liv having a second chance sounds very good and I cannot wait to find out if Liv feels the same way as the now merchant sailor.
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  • From ANON - suka on September 17, 2006
    So sweet I almost had tears. I love the ending. Beautifully written!
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  • From ANON - blossom on September 09, 2006
    ooh what's gonna happen now?? I hope Olivia isn't gone for good this time...Jack would be so sad. I'm loving this story (just as much as the previous one) and I hope you'll continue updating, this is really a pleasure reading. I also liked your idea of Tia Dalma being the woman Davy Jones loved. That's very interesting... ;-)
    bye for now,
    blossom
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  • From ANON - junkpuppet on September 02, 2006
    wonder what happened to the reviews... *sigh*
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  • From ANON - michelle on August 30, 2006
    Yay! Two more chapters. This story keeps getting more interesting all the time. Good work and I cannot wait for more.
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  • From junkpuppet on August 30, 2006
    Thanks everyone for the reviews. I've went in a changed a few things.. same plot and storyline just reworded a little better. Sorry for the incon! Chapter 4 will be up soon!
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  • From ANON - Teh Pirate-yObsessor on August 29, 2006
    Holy crap. I read your first story, adn was blown away, and now, you do it again?
    Man, anyways, soory for not reviewing before, but anyways, keep writing! Your doing a damn good job of it now, why stop?
    Thanks again!
    ^^
    -Teh Pirate-y Obsessor
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  • From ANON - Julianna on August 29, 2006
    I agree with Michelle, thank god its not Jack's time but aw that was so cute and sad all at the same time :( But I really liked this chapter, even if it was short lol. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read chapter 3!!

    Xox
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  • From ANON - Michelle on August 29, 2006
    Nice second chapter. The short but sweet reunion was tender. So it's not Jack's time yet, eh? At least he has a guardian angel to look after him. *Smiles*
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  • From ANON - Julianna on August 28, 2006
    Loves it! Such a good start to the new story. Keep up the good work :)


    Xox
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  • From junkpuppet on August 28, 2006
    Thanks! :) I'm glad you liked the prelude... I have high hopes for this story! Not as many days off from work this week though so updates mighte be few and far between but I'll try. Also, I wrote the first chapter last night when I was half asleep so I changed just a few things if you want to read it again.
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  • From ANON - michelle on August 28, 2006
    Nice beginning to the sequel of Open waters. I'm curious to see what Jack will do and how far he will go to get his love back. Will Tia have the ability to do it? Stay tuned. I await the next chapter. *smiles*
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